戦闘機械綾子 - Battlemachine Ayako - Revision history

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Darkbutflashy: /* The Story thus far */

2015-07-05T23:34:36Z

The Story thus far

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	;[[戦闘機械綾子 - Battlemachine Ayako/Interlude\|Interlude]]		;[[戦闘機械綾子 - Battlemachine Ayako/Interlude\|Interlude]]
	:Gender equality went too far		:Gender equality went too far
			;[[戦闘機械綾子 - Battlemachine Ayako/Rough'n'Ready\|Rough'n'Ready]]
			:We're fools to be professionals
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Rdaneel: Fixing Ellipses

2014-03-06T03:03:17Z

Fixing Ellipses

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	Aww, now I cannot await the moment where I'm up to tell you what happened to		Aww, now I cannot await the moment where I'm up to tell you what happened to
	me regarding this: it's so freaking cool to have a body like this. I never		me regarding this: it's so freaking cool to have a body like this. I never
	expected the sex...		expected the sex. . . .

	<pre style="background: transparent; border: none;"><nowiki>		<pre style="background: transparent; border: none;"><nowiki>
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	And here's Dark. He's cute, isn't he? I better start with the story right		And here's Dark. He's cute, isn't he? I better start with the story right
	now before he punishes me. Oh yeah, do me, angry little robot... Hihihihi!		now before he punishes me. Oh yeah, do me, angry little robot. . . . Hihihihi!
	</div>		</div>

Darkbutflashy: Deal with the fallout.

2014-02-28T21:58:27Z

Deal with the fallout.

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	insight than him on how it is to become and to be a machine		insight than him on how it is to become and to be a machine
	woman. I hope I can give you an impression.		woman. I hope I can give you an impression.
	<p style="font-family: monospace; font-size: 130%; line-height: 90%; margin-top: 2ex; background: transparent; border: none;">		<div style="font-family: monospace; font-size: 130%; line-height: 90%; margin-top: 2ex; background: transparent; border: none;">/-------------->-----><br />\| 戦闘機械　綾子<br />\| Sentō Kikai Ayako<br />\| Battlemachine Ayako<br />+--------------<-----------<<br />\| Written by [[User:darkbutflashy\|darkbutflashy]]<br />\| Edited by [[User:rdaneel\|R.Daneel]]<br />\| Originally released on fembotwiki<br />\---------------<-----------<-------<------<</div>
	/-------------->-----><br />
	\| 戦闘機械　綾子<br />
	\| Sentō Kikai Ayako<br />
	\| Battlemachine Ayako<br />
	+--------------<-----------<<br />
	\| Written by [[User:darkbutflashy\|darkbutflashy]]<br />
	\| Edited by [[User:rdaneel\|R.Daneel]]<br />
	\| Originally released on fembotwiki<br />
	\---------------<-----------<-------<------<
	</p>
	Ayako and I work for Olympus ESWAT. Dark has said to me		Ayako and I work for Olympus ESWAT. Dark has said to me
	you may already know Olympus from the famous Manga		you may already know Olympus from the famous Manga

Darkbutflashy: Make use of the new "story" CSS class, and use mdash instead of minus.

2014-02-28T21:50:13Z

Make use of the new "story" CSS class, and use mdash instead of minus.

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	<h3>Greetings to you Bioroids, Originals, Fellows!</h3>		<h3>Greetings to you Bioroids, Originals, Fellows!</h3>
	~~<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">~~
	My name is Irina Volkow and for sure you already have		My name is Irina Volkow and for sure you already have
	spotted I am a cybernetically enhanced woman. This is		spotted I am a cybernetically enhanced woman. This is
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	insight than him on how it is to become and to be a machine		insight than him on how it is to become and to be a machine
	woman. I hope I can give you an impression.		woman. I hope I can give you an impression.
	~~</p>~~
	<p style="font-family: monospace; font-size: 130%; line-height: 90%; margin-top: 2ex; background: transparent; border: none;">		<p style="font-family: monospace; font-size: 130%; line-height: 90%; margin-top: 2ex; background: transparent; border: none;">
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	</p>		</p>
	~~<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">~~
	Ayako and I work for Olympus ESWAT. Dark has said to me		Ayako and I work for Olympus ESWAT. Dark has said to me
	you may already know Olympus from the famous Manga		you may already know Olympus from the famous Manga
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	may get the picture even without reading those books.		may get the picture even without reading those books.
	Let your fantasy flow.		Let your fantasy flow.
	~~</p>~~
	~~<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">~~
	What Dark has really told me to impress upon you is this		What Dark has really told me to impress upon you is this
	isn't a piece of fanfiction for ''Appleseed''. You may		isn't a piece of fanfiction for ''Appleseed''. You may
	remember some of the people in the story, well, because those are the guys and		remember some of the people in the story, well, because those are the guys and
	gals Ayako and I work with every day. But do not expect this story to circle		gals Ayako and I work with every day. But do not expect this story to circle
	around Deunan and Briareos or have their characters developed ~~- or~~ worse,		around Deunan and Briareos or have their characters developed —or worse,
	repeated. It has been 20 years since the events of ''Appleseed'' and in the		repeated. It has been 20 years since the events of ''Appleseed'' and in the
	meantime, Deunan has followed Lance as ESWAT chief, while Lance had retired		meantime, Deunan has followed Lance as ESWAT chief, while Lance had retired
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	cooperation. Briareos has become the old hand of ESWAT for good reasons and is		cooperation. Briareos has become the old hand of ESWAT for good reasons and is
	still taking the squad lead most of the time, like he had done before.		still taking the squad lead most of the time, like he had done before.
	~~</p>~~
	~~<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">~~
	A lot of other things happened in the last 20 years. but it is still undecided		A lot of other things happened in the last 20 years. but it is still undecided
	whether Olympus is an utopia or dystopia. Maybe that's just how life goes.		whether Olympus is an utopia or dystopia. Maybe that's just how life goes.
	Worldwide political instability, social imbalance, and ~~- to~~ spice it ~~up -~~		Worldwide political instability, social imbalance, and —to spice it up—
	plain crime leads to all kinds of violence against the citizens of Olympus.		plain crime leads to all kinds of violence against the citizens of Olympus.
	Which is the reason why our ESWAT unit is still needed.		Which is the reason why our ESWAT unit is still needed.
	~~</p>~~
	~~<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">~~		Ayako and I mainly work as hostage negotiators and —when negotiations fail—
	Ayako and I mainly work as hostage negotiators and ~~- when~~ negotiations ~~fail~~		as hostage rescuers. The latter only since... oh well, I better tell the
	- as hostage rescuers. The latter only since... oh well, I better tell the
	story Dark has taken down up from the beginning to avoid spoiling the best		story Dark has taken down up from the beginning to avoid spoiling the best
	parts.		parts.
	~~</p>~~
	~~<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">~~
	A last note from me, especially on these "best parts": both Ayako and I are		A last note from me, especially on these "best parts": both Ayako and I are
	real women with real feelings. Human feelings. We certainly get physical too,		real women with real feelings. Human feelings. We certainly get physical too,
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	adorable we are as persons. Plus, I will punish you, and not in the good,		adorable we are as persons. Plus, I will punish you, and not in the good,
	sexual way.		sexual way.
	~~</p>~~
	~~<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">~~
	Aww, now I cannot await the moment where I'm up to tell you what happened to		Aww, now I cannot await the moment where I'm up to tell you what happened to
	me regarding this: it's so freaking cool to have a body like this. I never		me regarding this: it's so freaking cool to have a body like this. I never
	expected the sex...		expected the sex...
	~~</p>~~
	<pre style="background: transparent; border: none;"><nowiki>		<pre style="background: transparent; border: none;"><nowiki>
	.------------------------.		.------------------------.
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	^^^ ^^^		^^^ ^^^
	</nowiki></pre>		</nowiki></pre>
	~~<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">~~
	And here's Dark. He's cute, isn't he? I better start with the story right		And here's Dark. He's cute, isn't he? I better start with the story right
	now before he punishes me. Oh yeah, do me, angry little robot... Hihihihi!		now before he punishes me. Oh yeah, do me, angry little robot... Hihihihi!
	~~</p>~~
	</div>		</div>

Darkbutflashy: The story was edited by User:Rdaneel. Many, many thanks! (Any remaining mistakes are still mine.)

2014-02-27T13:26:58Z

The story was edited by User:Rdaneel. Many, many thanks! (Any remaining mistakes are still mine.)

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	woman. I hope I can give you an impression.		woman. I hope I can give you an impression.
	</p>		</p>
	<~~pre~~ style="background: transparent; border: none;"~~><nowiki~~>		<p style="font-family: monospace; font-size: 130%; line-height: 90%; margin-top: 2ex; background: transparent; border: none;">
	/-------------->----->		/-------------->-----><br />
	\| 戦闘機械　綾子		\| 戦闘機械　綾子<br />
	\| Sentō Kikai Ayako		\| Sentō Kikai Ayako<br />
	\| Battlemachine Ayako		\| Battlemachine Ayako<br />
	+--------------<-----------<		+--------------<-----------<<br />
	\| Written by darkbutflashy		\| Written by [[User:darkbutflashy\|darkbutflashy]]<br />
	\| Originally released on fembotwiki		\| Edited by [[User:rdaneel\|R.Daneel]]<br />
			\| Originally released on fembotwiki<br />
	\---------------<-----------<-------<------<		\---------------<-----------<-------<------<
	</~~nowiki></pre~~>		</p>
	<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">		<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">
	Ayako and I work for Olympus ESWAT. Dark has said to me		Ayako and I work for Olympus ESWAT. Dark has said to me

Rdaneel: Minor corrections at Dark's request. I hope you approve.

2014-02-19T14:03:17Z

Minor corrections at Dark's request. I hope you approve.

Darkbutflashy: fixing some grammar (I hope)

2014-02-18T11:09:58Z

fixing some grammar (I hope)

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	She's a cyborg woman like me. Dark has written down her		She's a cyborg woman like me. Dark has written down her
	story and has asked me to tell it to you as I have more		story and has asked me to tell it to you as I have more
	insight than him how it is to become and to be a machine		insight than him on how it is to become and to be a machine
	woman. I hope I can give you an impression.		woman. I hope I can give you an impression.
	</p>		</p>
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	gals Ayako and I work with every day. But do not expect this story to circle		gals Ayako and I work with every day. But do not expect this story to circle
	around Deunan and Briareos or have their characters developed - or worse,		around Deunan and Briareos or have their characters developed - or worse,
	~~repetited~~. It has been 20 years since the events of ''Appleseed'' and in the		repeated. It has been 20 years since the events of ''Appleseed'' and in the
	meantime, Deunan has followed Lance as ESWAT chief, while Lance had retired		meantime, Deunan has followed Lance as ESWAT chief, while Lance had retired
	and has since been working as a honorary counselor for international police		and has since been working as a honorary counselor for international police
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	</p>		</p>
	<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">		<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">
	Ayako and I mainly work as hostage negotiators and - when negotiations ~~failed~~		Ayako and I mainly work as hostage negotiators and - when negotiations fail
	- as hostage rescuers. The latter only since... oh well, I better tell the		- as hostage rescuers. The latter only since... oh well, I better tell the
	story Dark has taken down up from the beginning to avoid spoiling the best		story Dark has taken down up from the beginning to avoid spoiling the best
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	<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">		<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">
	A last note from me, especially on these "best parts": both Ayako and I are		A last note from me, especially on these "best parts": both Ayako and I are
	real women with real feelings. Human feelings. We certainly get physical, too,		real women with real feelings. Human feelings. We certainly get physical too,
	and I will report it unsparingly, like Dark has written it down. But if you		and I will report it unsparingly, like Dark has written it down. But if you
	just rush through the remaining story to get to these hot & steamy parts,		just rush through the remaining story to get to these hot & steamy parts,
	you are going to miss the whole point of them. Which is feelings and how		you are going to miss the whole point of them. Which is feelings and how
	~~adoreable~~ we are as persons. Plus, I will punish you, and ~~this~~ not in the		adorable we are as persons. Plus, I will punish you, and not in the good,
	good, sexual way.		sexual way.
	</p>		</p>
	<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">		<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">
	Aww, now I cannot await the moment where I'm up to tell you what happened to		Aww, now I cannot await the moment where I'm up to tell you what happened to
	me regarding to this: it's so freaking cool to have a body like this. I never		me regarding this: it's so freaking cool to have a body like this. I never
	expected the sex...		expected the sex...
	</p>		</p>

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	Ayako and me work for Olympus ESWAT. Dark has said to me		Ayako and I work for Olympus ESWAT. Dark has said to me
	you may already know Olympus from the famous Manga		you may already know Olympus from the famous Manga
	''Appleseed'' from the even more famous artist ''Masamune Shirow''.		''Appleseed'' from the even more famous artist ''Masamune Shirow''.
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	isn't a piece of fanfiction for ''Appleseed''. You may		isn't a piece of fanfiction for ''Appleseed''. You may
	remember some of the people in the story, well, because those are the guys and		remember some of the people in the story, well, because those are the guys and
	gals Ayako and me work with every day. But do not expect this story to circle		gals Ayako and I work with every day. But do not expect this story to circle
	around Deunan and Briareos or have their characters developed - or worse,		around Deunan and Briareos or have their characters developed - or worse,
	repetited. It has been 20 years since the events of ''Appleseed'' and in the		repetited. It has been 20 years since the events of ''Appleseed'' and in the
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	</p>		</p>
	<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">		<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">
	Ayako and me mainly work as hostage negotiators and - when negotiations failed		Ayako and I mainly work as hostage negotiators and - when negotiations failed
	- as hostage rescuers. The latter only since... oh well, I better tell the		- as hostage rescuers. The latter only since... oh well, I better tell the
	story Dark has taken down up from the beginning to avoid spoiling the best		story Dark has taken down up from the beginning to avoid spoiling the best
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	</p>		</p>
	<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">		<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">
	A last note from me, especially on these "best parts": both Ayako and me are		A last note from me, especially on these "best parts": both Ayako and I are
	real women with real feelings. Human feelings. We certainly get physical, too,		real women with real feelings. Human feelings. We certainly get physical, too,
	and I will report it unsparingly, like Dark has written it down. But if you		and I will report it unsparingly, like Dark has written it down. But if you
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	==The Story thus far==		==The Story thus far==
	;[[戦闘機械綾子 - Battlemachine Ayako/First Encounter of another Kind\|First Encounter of another Kind]]		;[[戦闘機械綾子 - Battlemachine Ayako/First Encounter of another Kind\|First Encounter of another Kind]]

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