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	~~Part 1~~		Writer's note: See the full story I wrote last year “[[Fighting Love]]”

			==A.D.P.I. (Advance Police Investigations) Case 2: DEVIL ON THE RUN==
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	Arriving home at 3:00am was always a disappointment to Nagisa.		Arriving home at 3:00am was always a disappointment to Nagisa.

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	"How easily they die..." she said to herself, taking a shower, washing off all the blood.		"How easily they die..." she said to herself, taking a shower, washing off all the blood.

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			===Part 2===
	~~A.D.P.I. (Advance Police Investigations).~~
	~~Case # 2 : DEVIL ON THE RUN.~~
	Part 2

	"Careful where you step, sir, you might get some blood on you." the police man told me.		"Careful where you step, sir, you might get some blood on you." the police man told me.

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	"I know... that boomer, she will kill again and again... until we solve her little puzzle of her actions. I am trying to see the link in all that..." I said, checking at my notes. Looking at the grey sky, I knew I would be in over my head again.... I just love my job...		"I know... that boomer, she will kill again and again... until we solve her little puzzle of her actions. I am trying to see the link in all that..." I said, checking at my notes. Looking at the grey sky, I knew I would be in over my head again.... I just love my job...

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	Part 3

	"Welcome back, Detective O'Conner." a young rooky cop smiled at me.		"Welcome back, Detective O'Conner." a young rooky cop smiled at me.

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	Slowly, I moved the clothes a bit and saw some bones with decomposing flesh on it falling out of the clothes. "I guess I found her first victim." I said, calling for my team to come down to see this.		Slowly, I moved the clothes a bit and saw some bones with decomposing flesh on it falling out of the clothes. "I guess I found her first victim." I said, calling for my team to come down to see this.

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	Part 4

	"Name's is Henry Haya, according to his files, used to be a mechanic for a Fighting Boomer called Annie." the Coroner was informing me.		"Name's is Henry Haya, according to his files, used to be a mechanic for a Fighting Boomer called Annie." the Coroner was informing me.

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	"How to prove to yourself you are sane when you are insane. That is what I think Annie is trying to do." I smiled, dropping the book on the floor.		"How to prove to yourself you are sane when you are insane. That is what I think Annie is trying to do." I smiled, dropping the book on the floor.

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	Part 5

	"Can an A.I. become insane?" I asked out loud, frustrated at the notion.		"Can an A.I. become insane?" I asked out loud, frustrated at the notion.

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	I frowned to myself in a mirror on the wall.		I frowned to myself in a mirror on the wall.

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	Part 6

	“He's alive???" I asked with astonishment.		“He's alive???" I asked with astonishment.

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	“Annie??? What are you planning????" I said out loud, knowing it was her, controlling the airwaves.		“Annie??? What are you planning????" I said out loud, knowing it was her, controlling the airwaves.

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	Part 7

	Scratching my head, I was nervously trying to think of what to do next. I knew it would be impossible to track her down from which radio station she had managed to tap into.		Scratching my head, I was nervously trying to think of what to do next. I knew it would be impossible to track her down from which radio station she had managed to tap into.

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	“Shhh... we'll survive, don't worry... the AD police will always be there to stop crazy boomers and androids, always..." I whispered to her, knowing that she just maybe became sentient.		“Shhh... we'll survive, don't worry... the AD police will always be there to stop crazy boomers and androids, always..." I whispered to her, knowing that she just maybe became sentient.

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	"How easily they die..." she said to herself, taking a shower, washing off all the blood.		"How easily they die..." she said to herself, taking a shower, washing off all the blood.
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	A.D.P.I. (Advance Police Investigations).		A.D.P.I. (Advance Police Investigations).
	Case # 2 : DEVIL ON THE RUN.		Case # 2 : DEVIL ON THE RUN.
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	"I know... that boomer, she will kill again and again... until we solve her little puzzle of her actions. I am trying to see the link in all that..." I said, checking at my notes. Looking at the grey sky, I knew I would be in over my head again.... I just love my job...		"I know... that boomer, she will kill again and again... until we solve her little puzzle of her actions. I am trying to see the link in all that..." I said, checking at my notes. Looking at the grey sky, I knew I would be in over my head again.... I just love my job...
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	Slowly, I moved the clothes a bit and saw some bones with decomposing flesh on it falling out of the clothes. "I guess I found her first victim." I said, calling for my team to come down to see this.		Slowly, I moved the clothes a bit and saw some bones with decomposing flesh on it falling out of the clothes. "I guess I found her first victim." I said, calling for my team to come down to see this.
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	"How to prove to yourself you are sane when you are insane. That is what I think Annie is trying to do." I smiled, dropping the book on the floor.		"How to prove to yourself you are sane when you are insane. That is what I think Annie is trying to do." I smiled, dropping the book on the floor.
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	I frowned to myself in a mirror on the wall.		I frowned to myself in a mirror on the wall.
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	“Annie??? What are you planning????" I said out loud, knowing it was her, controlling the airwaves.		“Annie??? What are you planning????" I said out loud, knowing it was her, controlling the airwaves.
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	"How easily they die..." she said to herself, taking a shower, washing off all the blood.		"How easily they die..." she said to herself, taking a shower, washing off all the blood.
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	"I know... that boomer, she will kill again and again... until we solve her little puzzle of her actions. I am trying to see the link in all that..." I said, checking at my notes. Looking at the grey sky, I knew I would be in over my head again.... I just love my job...		"I know... that boomer, she will kill again and again... until we solve her little puzzle of her actions. I am trying to see the link in all that..." I said, checking at my notes. Looking at the grey sky, I knew I would be in over my head again.... I just love my job...
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	Slowly, I moved the clothes a bit and saw some bones with decomposing flesh on it falling out of the clothes. "I guess I found her first victim." I said, calling for my team to come down to see this.		Slowly, I moved the clothes a bit and saw some bones with decomposing flesh on it falling out of the clothes. "I guess I found her first victim." I said, calling for my team to come down to see this.
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	"How to prove to yourself you are sane when you are insane. That is what I think Annie is trying to do." I smiled, dropping the book on the floor.		"How to prove to yourself you are sane when you are insane. That is what I think Annie is trying to do." I smiled, dropping the book on the floor.
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	I frowned to myself in a mirror on the wall.		I frowned to myself in a mirror on the wall.
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	“Annie??? What are you planning????" I said out loud, knowing it was her, controlling the airwaves.		“Annie??? What are you planning????" I said out loud, knowing it was her, controlling the airwaves.
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