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	“I’m sure her work is important.” David countered. As appealing as the offer sounded, he really could wait another half hour for her if it meant getting away from this man a minute sooner.		“I’m sure her work is important.” David countered. As appealing as the offer sounded, he really could wait another half hour for her if it meant getting away from this man a minute sooner.

	“Oh, not at all,” Dr. Morris replied, “we just have her do some of the ~~controlled~~ tests on the builds that use the standardized formulas, any idiot could do it. But testing the truly experimental ones, they require so much more…creativity.”		“Oh, not at all,” Dr. Morris replied, “we just have her do some of the control tests on the builds that use the standardized formulas, any idiot could do it. But testing the truly experimental ones, they require so much more…creativity.”

	“I see, um…” David was hard press for another excuse.		“I see, um…” David was hard press for another excuse.
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	David listened intently.		David listened intently.

	“Something that perceives, comprehends, reasons, comes to conclusions, then finally makes a decision,” the doctor continued on, “But in the end, we only want them to ~~make~~ come to the conclusions and make the decisions we desire. We can make a perfect system, and by perfect that I mean, alien, inhuman, overly literal, lacking any frame of reference…dumb as a post.”		“Something that perceives, comprehends, reasons, comes to conclusions, then finally makes a decision,” the doctor continued on, “But in the end, we only want them to come to the conclusions and make the decisions we desire. We can make a perfect system, and by perfect that I mean, alien, inhuman, overly literal, lacking any frame of reference…dumb as a post.”

	Morris looked at his black berry again, and they turned left.		Morris looked at his black berry again, and they turned left.

	“So we give them emotions,” he went on, “limited, directed, incomplete, but hopefully enough to let them understand. Were that all maybe this job would be easy; but what’s the point of having something that makes the same mistake, over and over. So we have them learn, grow, and change.”		“So we give them emotions,” he went on, “limited, directed, incomplete, but hopefully enough to let them understand. Were that all, maybe this job would be easy; but what’s the point of having something that makes the same mistake, over and over. So we have them learn, grow, and change.”

	Morris looked at the black berry again, and they turned left. David wondered what he kept looking at, it wasn’t a map, from a brief glimpse it seemed text of some type. Wait…left, left, left… was he leading him in a circle?		Morris looked at the black berry again, and they turned left. David wondered what he kept looking at, it wasn’t a map, from a brief glimpse it seemed text of some type. Wait…left, left, left… was he leading him in a circle?

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	Alyssa quietly stared out the window as they drove home.		Alyssa quietly stared out the window as they drove home.

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			==A Contradiction of Life - Part 1==

	David was working through his lunch break… or trying to anyway. His progress was pretty much non-existent, as he sat there looking at the glowing screen.		David was working through his lunch break… or trying to anyway. His progress was pretty much non-existent, as he sat there looking at the glowing screen.
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	“Lunch now, secrets later!” Alyssa dragged a confused David to the cafeteria.		“Lunch now, secrets later!” Alyssa dragged a confused David to the cafeteria.
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	David was waiting in the lobby when Alyssa walked up and kissed him.		David was waiting in the lobby when Alyssa walked up and kissed him.
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	Alyssa closed her access panel; the seams in her chest disappearing with a click.		Alyssa closed her access panel; the seams in her chest disappearing with a click.
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	“But now I love you,” Alyssa purred as she shifted herself to sit in his lap, “So… dinner and a movie?”		“But now I love you,” Alyssa purred as she shifted herself to sit in his lap, “So… dinner and a movie?”
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	Alyssa and David drove to the movies.		Alyssa and David drove to the movies.
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	“It’s ok,” She whispered quietly, “You don’t have to answer… I know… I’m just a robot.”		“It’s ok,” She whispered quietly, “You don’t have to answer… I know… I’m just a robot.”
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	David woke up to a surge of pleasure.		David woke up to a surge of pleasure.
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	“Yeah…” She said, “I kinda think that to.”		“Yeah…” She said, “I kinda think that to.”
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	A Contradiction of Life - Part 5		==A Contradiction of Life - Part 5==

	David pondered Alyssa’s words as they arrived home. He realized what they meant; with that realization, came other unpleasant, if obvious, realizations.		David pondered Alyssa’s words as they arrived home. He realized what they meant; with that realization, came other unpleasant, if obvious, realizations.
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	David bolted awake suddenly. Not the pleasant kind of awakening, like to one he had the day before, but the kind fueled by half remembered nightmares.		David bolted awake suddenly. Not the pleasant kind of awakening, like to one he had the day before, but the kind fueled by half remembered nightmares.
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	“We could run away together.” David suggested.		“We could run away together.” David suggested.
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	David had mixed feelings.		David had mixed feelings.
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	David came to pick up Alyssa. He had dropped her off the night before for her final analysis.		David came to pick up Alyssa. He had dropped her off the night before for her final analysis.
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	“Make me her.” Alyssa asked.		“Make me her.” Alyssa asked.

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	“Make me her.” Alyssa asked.		“Make me her.” Alyssa asked.
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	Alyssa was immediately silent.		Alyssa was immediately silent.

	David looked at her; she looked miserable. He wanted to hold her and tell her it would be alright, but he knew that would be exactly the wrong tact to take.		David looked at her; she looked miserable. He wanted to hold her and tell her it would be alright, but he knew that would be exactly the wrong tact to take.

	“Alyssa,” David said, blushing slightly, “skirt and panties off, on the table, legs spread.”		“Alyssa,” David said, blushing slightly, “skirt and panties off, on the table, legs spread.”