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	…or terminate their working relationship in a far-too permanent manner.		…or terminate their working relationship in a far-too permanent manner.

	Apart from the “target/client” lists, Aaberg had been keeping a running tab on various factors whereever he stayed, with the most ~~noticable~~ being a list of potential “new girls” for his ever-growing entourage. Many of the names listed for Miami were gynoids working at the Fontainebleau---including the maid who’d been taken down by Vicki a little under an hour ago---and several others had ALPA database numbers…including at least five sleepers in close proximity to the Fontainebleau.		Apart from the “target/client” lists, Aaberg had been keeping a running tab on various factors whereever he stayed, with the most noticeable being a list of potential “new girls” for his ever-growing entourage. Many of the names listed for Miami were gynoids working at the Fontainebleau---including the maid who’d been taken down by Vicki a little under an hour ago---and several others had ALPA database numbers…including at least five sleepers in close proximity to the Fontainebleau.

	The fact that “Melanie Rothschilde” was the newest entry on the Miami list really didn’t help.		The fact that “Melanie Rothschilde” was the newest entry on the Miami list really didn’t help.

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	Already dreading what she’d find, Vicki made her way into the room…and froze.		Already dreading what she’d find, Vicki made her way into the room…and froze.

	Tavares’ two bodyguards lay slumped against the wall, knocked ~~unconcious~~ by blunt force trauma to the back of the head (thank you, medical imaging software); a quiet moan from the bathroom alerted Vicki to the fact that Lu was still alive…and bleeding from the rather sizeable gash on his forehead.		Tavares’ two bodyguards lay slumped against the wall, knocked unconscious by blunt force trauma to the back of the head (thank you, medical imaging software); a quiet moan from the bathroom alerted Vicki to the fact that Lu was still alive…and bleeding from the rather sizeable gash on his forehead.

	As for Tavares himself….		As for Tavares himself….

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	That prompted Vicki to quit giggling. “Hannsen conned Stahl?! When did that happen?”		That prompted Vicki to quit giggling. “Hannsen conned Stahl?! When did that happen?”

	“Back in the 90s, when Hannsen was part of that stupid ‘Great Dirty World Wide Web’ group with that…oh, what the hell was his name…never mind. In any case, Hannsen ended up scamming one of Stahl’s banks out of a pretty large sum by way of computer trickery…then exposed his affair with his ~~neice~~ to the press.”		“Back in the 90s, when Hannsen was part of that stupid ‘Great Dirty World Wide Web’ group with that…oh, what the hell was his name…never mind. In any case, Hannsen ended up scamming one of Stahl’s banks out of a pretty large sum by way of computer trickery…then exposed his affair with his niece to the press.”

	“They were the ones who leaked that story?” Vicki gasped, genuinely surprised. She’d remembered hearing about it on most of the major channels---namely because the news broke into a marathon of the Sophia Starlet cartoon she’d been watching. “I can see why he’d be mad at Hannsen for that,” she acquiesced, “but why me? Other than the beating him at blackjack thing, I mean…”		“They were the ones who leaked that story?” Vicki gasped, genuinely surprised. She’d remembered hearing about it on most of the major channels---namely because the news broke into a marathon of the Sophia Starlet cartoon she’d been watching. “I can see why he’d be mad at Hannsen for that,” she acquiesced, “but why me? Other than the beating him at blackjack thing, I mean…”

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Part 2: LAs Vegas

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	Once again, she’d forgotten the all-too-common outcome that awaited anyone with that line of thought…		Once again, she’d forgotten the all-too-common outcome that awaited anyone with that line of thought…

	=Part 2: ~~LAs~~ Vegas=		=Part 2: Las Vegas=
	Encore Hotel - Las Vegas Strip - August 19, 2011, 01:15 PM		Encore Hotel - Las Vegas Strip - August 19, 2011, 01:15 PM

Spaz: New page: =Part 1= Chirkey Dam – Dagestan, Russia – August 11, 2011 Had anyone bothered to glance all the way up, at the apex of the Chirkey Dam, they would’ve seen a most interesting sight....

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New page: =Part 1= Chirkey Dam – Dagestan, Russia – August 11, 2011 Had anyone bothered to glance all the way up, at the apex of the Chirkey Dam, they would’ve seen a most interesting sight....

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