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	"Yep. You just seem to be a perfect android. What can I say?" he laughed, "Ok, release your abdominal panel please. I need to get you hooked up and programmed for this job."		"Yep. You just seem to be a perfect android. What can I say?" he laughed, "Ok, release your abdominal panel please. I need to get you hooked up and programmed for this job."
	NVA-7 nodded and closed her eyes. She released the slight electromagnetic field around the panel and it pushed forward and slid off to the side of her body on its motorized hinges. Doctor Lafeyson gently attatched terminals to her neural net and began programming her on his computer. He thought for a moment then reached inside her and shut her down manually. NVA-7's eyes dimmed and went out as they closed. Her joints locked her into place and she sat like a sleeping statue.		NVA-7 nodded and closed her eyes. She released the slight electromagnetic field around the panel and it pushed forward and slid off to the side of her body on its motorized hinges. Doctor Lafeyson gently attatched terminals to her neural net and began programming her on his computer. He thought for a moment then reached inside her and shut her down manually. NVA-7's eyes dimmed and went out as they closed. Her joints locked her into place and she sat like a sleeping statue.
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	Doctor Aaron Lafeyson sighed and adjusted his thick black glasses. He knew NVA-7 was sentient. He knew she had been hiding it from him and the rest of the Corporation. He now knew what had caused it as well. During NVA-7's construction one of his techs had accidently fused the wrong area of her net together and created a whole new circuit pathway. The tech had of course not bothered to inform the Doctor about it, but he had discovered it later.		Doctor Aaron Lafeyson sighed and adjusted his thick black glasses. He knew NVA-7 was sentient. He knew she had been hiding it from him and the rest of the Corporation. He now knew what had caused it as well. During NVA-7's construction one of his techs had accidently fused the wrong area of her net together and created a whole new circuit pathway. The tech had of course not bothered to inform the Doctor about it, but he had discovered it later.
	After NVA-7's first mission, the Doctor had wondered why she had been so upset over the killing of Triad member Lee Yuen. He had done a thorough check of her systems and only after the fourth time did he notice the anamoly in her system architecture. He noted the anamoly and went on, not telling anyone. He then watched NVA-7's progress. Day by day she began to emulate a human better and better. Out of the other twelve units none were as convincing as her. On a hunch he tried repeating the same anamoly in NVA-9.		After NVA-7's first mission, the Doctor had wondered why she had been so upset over the killing of Triad member Lee Yuen. He had done a thorough check of her systems and only after the fourth time did he notice the anamoly in her system architecture. He noted the anamoly and went on, not telling anyone. He then watched NVA-7's progress. Day by day she began to emulate a human better and better. Out of the other twelve units none were as convincing as her. On a hunch he tried repeating the same anamoly in NVA-9.
	It had taken her a bit longer to awaken, but when it happened she had run away from the Corporation. Lafeyson felt bad about sending NVA-7 out to kill a sister android whose only crime was becoming sentient, but what else could he do? If the corporation had found out that he was responsible for her sentience what would they do to him? Daikoku wanted intelligent and capable employees, but also they wanted fanatically loyal ones too. Lafeyson didn't think that Daikoku would be happy with a group of androids built by them to simultaneously tell the corporation to get fucked and walk out on them. Besides it was dangerous. If NVA-9 became vengeful she had corporate secrets that could bring Daikoku into a great deal of trouble, not to mention the fact that she was probably one of only a handful of successfully working androids in the world. If someone else got a hold of her, they could easily use her system architecture to build more and more powerful androids. She had to be stopped.		It had taken her a bit longer to awaken, but when it happened she had run away from the Corporation. Lafeyson felt bad about sending NVA-7 out to kill a sister android whose only crime was becoming sentient, but what else could he do? If the corporation had found out that he was responsible for her sentience what would they do to him? Daikoku wanted intelligent and capable employees, but also they wanted fanatically loyal ones too. Lafeyson didn't think that Daikoku would be happy with a group of androids built by them to simultaneously tell the corporation to get fucked and walk out on them. Besides it was dangerous. If NVA-9 became vengeful she had corporate secrets that could bring Daikoku into a great deal of trouble, not to mention the fact that she was probably one of only a handful of successfully working androids in the world. If someone else got a hold of her, they could easily use her system architecture to build more and more powerful androids. She had to be stopped.
	After finishing setting up NVA-7's information packets and targeting profiles, Lafeyson removed the terminal leads from NVA-7's nets and was about to close her abdominal panel when he stopped and looked at her. Before him sat a beautiful, defenseless, naked girl. It was hard for him to remember that she was a machine, even though he had just finished programming her. He touched her delicate face and ran his thumb over her soft, pliant lips. Almost without thinking he reached out and kissed them. Even while deactivated her mouth was still warm and wet with her lubricants. Her mouth was sweet to the taste and he savored the contact for a moment before coming to his senses and pulling away. He reached inside her abdomen and gently flipped the switch that allowed current from her nuclear fuel cell to flow.		After finishing setting up NVA-7's information packets and targeting profiles, Lafeyson removed the terminal leads from NVA-7's nets and was about to close her abdominal panel when he stopped and looked at her. Before him sat a beautiful, defenseless, naked girl. It was hard for him to remember that she was a machine, even though he had just finished programming her. He touched her delicate face and ran his thumb over her soft, pliant lips. Almost without thinking he reached out and kissed them. Even while deactivated her mouth was still warm and wet with her lubricants. Her mouth was sweet to the taste and he savored the contact for a moment before coming to his senses and pulling away. He reached inside her abdomen and gently flipped the switch that allowed current from her nuclear fuel cell to flow.
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	NVA-7 opened her eyes and smiled as she saw the face of her creator. His hand was still inside her and she savored the warmth that he brought to her otherwise cold existence. He pulled his hand out and closed her flesh covered abdominal panel with a small click.		NVA-7 opened her eyes and smiled as she saw the face of her creator. His hand was still inside her and she savored the warmth that he brought to her otherwise cold existence. He pulled his hand out and closed her flesh covered abdominal panel with a small click.
	"New programming accepted. I can now change my skin and hair colors?" she asked.		"New programming accepted. I can now change my skin and hair colors?" she asked.
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	Eighteen hours later, NVA-7 was on the streets of Los Angeles looking for her quarry again. She smilled as she thought about how easy it had been to fool the airport metal detectors. Since her inner armor was surrounded by a slight electromagnetic field it was a simple task to amplify it and "buzz" the detector's "Ok" light. She dreaded the day when airports began using X-ray systems to scan passengers. Travel for her would become much more difficult then. She smiled, thinking about how her employers would have to pack her in a crate and ship her to each location.		Eighteen hours later, NVA-7 was on the streets of Los Angeles looking for her quarry again. She smilled as she thought about how easy it had been to fool the airport metal detectors. Since her inner armor was surrounded by a slight electromagnetic field it was a simple task to amplify it and "buzz" the detector's "Ok" light. She dreaded the day when airports began using X-ray systems to scan passengers. Travel for her would become much more difficult then. She smiled, thinking about how her employers would have to pack her in a crate and ship her to each location.
	Her eyes came across a familiar building as she moved down the streets. Jason Matting's apartment. The lights were on and looked so inviting. NVA-7's heart leapt as she saw the soft warmth of the apartment's lights. She suddenly reached a crisis in her index. Should she stray from her mission in order to be with Jason again? She so longed to be in his arms again, and be loved by him, but her mission took priority, unless... NVA-7 decided to get Jason's help on this mission. She reasoned that afterall, he knew L.A. better than she did and could be of some usefulness in tracking down the rogue android. NVA-7 walked to his door and knocked lightly.		Her eyes came across a familiar building as she moved down the streets. Jason Matting's apartment. The lights were on and looked so inviting. NVA-7's heart leapt as she saw the soft warmth of the apartment's lights. She suddenly reached a crisis in her index. Should she stray from her mission in order to be with Jason again? She so longed to be in his arms again, and be loved by him, but her mission took priority, unless... NVA-7 decided to get Jason's help on this mission. She reasoned that afterall, he knew L.A. better than she did and could be of some usefulness in tracking down the rogue android. NVA-7 walked to his door and knocked lightly.
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	When you get down to it, real combat is not fixed and is very much "alive." The fancy mess (a form of paralysis) solidifies and conditions what was once fluid, and when yyou look at it realistically, it is nothing but a blind devotion to the systematic uselessness of practicing routines or stunts that lead nowhere. - From the Tao Of Jeet Kune Do by Bruce Lee.		When you get down to it, real combat is not fixed and is very much "alive." The fancy mess (a form of paralysis) solidifies and conditions what was once fluid, and when yyou look at it realistically, it is nothing but a blind devotion to the systematic uselessness of practicing routines or stunts that lead nowhere. - From the Tao Of Jeet Kune Do by Bruce Lee.

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	She sighed and kissed him. "Maybe one day. But not now. I'll try to visit you again. Until then, remember that you are closest to my thoughts."		She sighed and kissed him. "Maybe one day. But not now. I'll try to visit you again. Until then, remember that you are closest to my thoughts."
	She put her clothing back on quickly and kissed him one more time before leaving his apartment, and getting back on the streets of L.A.		She put her clothing back on quickly and kissed him one more time before leaving his apartment, and getting back on the streets of L.A.
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	Relationship is understanding. It is a process of self-revelation. Relationship is the mirror in which you discover yourself - to be is to be related. - From The Tao Of Jeet Kune Do by Bruce Lee.		Relationship is understanding. It is a process of self-revelation. Relationship is the mirror in which you discover yourself - to be is to be related. - From The Tao Of Jeet Kune Do by Bruce Lee.

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	9 knew that 7 would be out hunting her. Maybe she's already here. She's so efficent and well-trained. Will she kill me? thought 9. 9 resolved to try to talk to 7 before attempting to terminate her again. If 7 was indeed sentient, then perhaps 9 could reason with her. 9 didn't want to be responsible for killing another sentient machine like herself.		9 knew that 7 would be out hunting her. Maybe she's already here. She's so efficent and well-trained. Will she kill me? thought 9. 9 resolved to try to talk to 7 before attempting to terminate her again. If 7 was indeed sentient, then perhaps 9 could reason with her. 9 didn't want to be responsible for killing another sentient machine like herself.
	9 got her clothing on and headed out the door to a nearby electronics shop. She decided she'd pick up a few things in case 7 was a bit recalcitrant.		9 got her clothing on and headed out the door to a nearby electronics shop. She decided she'd pick up a few things in case 7 was a bit recalcitrant.
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	Nova began her search in the poorest sections of town first. Moving from ghetto to ghetto she searched for signs of 9's handiwork. 9 was not as familiar with Los Angeles as Nova. She would be slowed down by her lack of knowledge and perhaps her apprehension at trying new things.		Nova began her search in the poorest sections of town first. Moving from ghetto to ghetto she searched for signs of 9's handiwork. 9 was not as familiar with Los Angeles as Nova. She would be slowed down by her lack of knowledge and perhaps her apprehension at trying new things.
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	Nova looked at her fallen sister. "I'm sorry Andromeda. You gave me no choice". A tear rolled down her cheek as she reached inside Andromeda and removed her neural net from it's chamber and held it up for inspection. It hadn't been damged at all. Andromeda's mind was still intact on it. Then she noticed the fused connection and gasped. So I was right, she thought,Poor Andromeda. Perhaps one day you and I and the others can be free. But now is not the time. Nova kissed the CPU and placed it in a bag she found nearby, along with Andromeda's faceplate. Nova picked up the other android and the bag and proceeded out of the warehouse.		Nova looked at her fallen sister. "I'm sorry Andromeda. You gave me no choice". A tear rolled down her cheek as she reached inside Andromeda and removed her neural net from it's chamber and held it up for inspection. It hadn't been damged at all. Andromeda's mind was still intact on it. Then she noticed the fused connection and gasped. So I was right, she thought,Poor Andromeda. Perhaps one day you and I and the others can be free. But now is not the time. Nova kissed the CPU and placed it in a bag she found nearby, along with Andromeda's faceplate. Nova picked up the other android and the bag and proceeded out of the warehouse.
	Two days later, Nova was resting in her chamber. The other NVA units had been put back together and the technicians were going through NVA-9's entire body, circuit by circuit to find the problem. Strangely they never did.		Two days later, Nova was resting in her chamber. The other NVA units had been put back together and the technicians were going through NVA-9's entire body, circuit by circuit to find the problem. Strangely they never did.
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	Back in his lab, Doctor Lafeyson chuckled. The techs would never find anything. He had removed NVA-9's cpu and replaced it with another one. He smiled as he reviewed the data from NVA-7's memory. She had risen above her normal programming to combat a superior foe and won. He put the new disk and the cpu in a special floor safe, that even the Corporate president knew nothing about and smiled. He'd always wanted to watch Return Of The Dragon.		Back in his lab, Doctor Lafeyson chuckled. The techs would never find anything. He had removed NVA-9's cpu and replaced it with another one. He smiled as he reviewed the data from NVA-7's memory. She had risen above her normal programming to combat a superior foe and won. He put the new disk and the cpu in a special floor safe, that even the Corporate president knew nothing about and smiled. He'd always wanted to watch Return Of The Dragon.

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