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Chapter 10 - Identification and registration

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Spaz: Text replacement - "she had had" to "she'd had"

2019-10-24T00:04:18Z

Text replacement - "she had had" to "she'd had"

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	"We'll there isn't much I can do for that" he continued, "but I can rebuild her body, or at least partially until we can custom fit her with new skin. Her old epidermal is shot." He handed me the metal torso and approached the girl.		"We'll there isn't much I can do for that" he continued, "but I can rebuild her body, or at least partially until we can custom fit her with new skin. Her old epidermal is shot." He handed me the metal torso and approached the girl.

	He pulled the sheet away from her body gently, and revealed her delicate framework. I could tell from looking at her that she was much much older than her appearance lead on. Her face was youthful, that of a twenty-something year old girl, but her robotic body was an antique. She was little more than a wind-up doll outfitted with a battery, which looked like the newest thing in her and even that was out of date. Green corrosion covered parts of her copper frame, and various brass fittings were tarnished with age. She was full of gears and servos and pistons. The skin she ~~had~~ had on must have also been a recent addition, but it wasn't advanced like Ellie's.		He pulled the sheet away from her body gently, and revealed her delicate framework. I could tell from looking at her that she was much much older than her appearance lead on. Her face was youthful, that of a twenty-something year old girl, but her robotic body was an antique. She was little more than a wind-up doll outfitted with a battery, which looked like the newest thing in her and even that was out of date. Green corrosion covered parts of her copper frame, and various brass fittings were tarnished with age. She was full of gears and servos and pistons. The skin she'd had on must have also been a recent addition, but it wasn't advanced like Ellie's.

	She didn't react when we uncovered her body, still deep in thought. She never felt any pain, but she did seem troubled by her thoughts. The wear and tear of her body surprised me. I had never seen a working robot this old before, and something told me she was different, she was important. The repairman opened a bag full of gears and the like, and without any further ado, we began working on repairing her damaged body.		She didn't react when we uncovered her body, still deep in thought. She never felt any pain, but she did seem troubled by her thoughts. The wear and tear of her body surprised me. I had never seen a working robot this old before, and something told me she was different, she was important. The repairman opened a bag full of gears and the like, and without any further ado, we began working on repairing her damaged body.

Spaz: Text replacement - " cant" to "can't"

2019-10-23T23:14:22Z

Text replacement - " cant" to "can't"

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Spaz: New page: =Chapter 1 - Fateful meeting= Three days have passed since the attack on our village, and people were still riled up by it. A lone flying armored unit had attacked our secluded village, Ma...

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New page: =Chapter 1 - Fateful meeting= Three days have passed since the attack on our village, and people were still riled up by it. A lone flying armored unit had attacked our secluded village, Ma...

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	I pulled in to the fuel station somewhere in the mid afternoon. The sun was shining bright, but the wind had a cold chill to it that cut to the bone. As cold as the wind was, my initial impression of this place was even colder.		I pulled in to the fuel station somewhere in the mid afternoon. The sun was shining bright, but the wind had a cold chill to it that cut to the bone. As cold as the wind was, my initial impression of this place was even colder.

	The fuel depot was run down, old, dingy, and worn. The shop in the center contained everything a traveler would need, and then some, and it was surrounded by a handful of fuel pumps. I knew it was my only real chance to fuel up before the rest of my drive, and despite the food I had with me, ~~my canteen~~ was low on water, and needed to get something to drink and take with me. I parked next to a fuel pump, and an attendant came out. He was a young thin kid, probably still in his mid-teenage years, and wore his cap low about his eyes. I handed him a single gold coin, and told him to fill it up as I got out the containers Genesis threw in the back for me. The boy eyed the coin, his eyes growing wide.		The fuel depot was run down, old, dingy, and worn. The shop in the center contained everything a traveler would need, and then some, and it was surrounded by a handful of fuel pumps. I knew it was my only real chance to fuel up before the rest of my drive, and despite the food I had with me, mycan'teen was low on water, and needed to get something to drink and take with me. I parked next to a fuel pump, and an attendant came out. He was a young thin kid, probably still in his mid-teenage years, and wore his cap low about his eyes. I handed him a single gold coin, and told him to fill it up as I got out the containers Genesis threw in the back for me. The boy eyed the coin, his eyes growing wide.

	"If you're fast you can keep the change" I told him. He smiled and instantly started pumping gas and doing whatever else he could to help. A gold coin was the smallest denomination I had on me, and it was also worth more than this kid probably took home of pay in a month.		"If you're fast you can keep the change" I told him. He smiled and instantly started pumping gas and doing whatever else he could to help. A gold coin was the smallest denomination I had on me, and it was also worth more than this kid probably took home of pay in a month.

	A familiar sound from the other side of the building alerted me to the presence of an Ino guard. I ducked down as it took to the sky, and flew off. He had been refilling just on the other side of the station, and I never noticed. I was going to have to be more careful in the future. I helped the lad fill up the various containers and securing everything back in the truck before deciding to head in the fill ~~my canteen~~ with water.		A familiar sound from the other side of the building alerted me to the presence of an Ino guard. I ducked down as it took to the sky, and flew off. He had been refilling just on the other side of the station, and I never noticed. I was going to have to be more careful in the future. I helped the lad fill up the various containers and securing everything back in the truck before deciding to head in the fill mycan'teen with water.

	As I reached to open the door, my own face greeted me. It wasn't a mirror or reflection in glass; it was a drawing, a poster. My eyes were a little too beady, and my nose a bit too large, but it was me alright. I beheld an artist's rendition of myself on a wanted poster. I froze in my tracks and I studied the paper.		As I reached to open the door, my own face greeted me. It wasn't a mirror or reflection in glass; it was a drawing, a poster. My eyes were a little too beady, and my nose a bit too large, but it was me alright. I beheld an artist's rendition of myself on a wanted poster. I froze in my tracks and I studied the paper.
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	I got out to fill my tank with fuel as the warm light of the setting sun shot through the trees. As I prepared to start unloading the canisters from the back, a sound, faint at first, drew my attention. I don't know why I didn't notice it instantly, but now the sound of running water called to me, and my thirst was renewed. With my canister in hand, I left my truck and headed to find the source of the sound.		I got out to fill my tank with fuel as the warm light of the setting sun shot through the trees. As I prepared to start unloading the canisters from the back, a sound, faint at first, drew my attention. I don't know why I didn't notice it instantly, but now the sound of running water called to me, and my thirst was renewed. With my canister in hand, I left my truck and headed to find the source of the sound.

	The water got louder and louder the deeper into the woods I went. I found my way into a small clearing surrounding a pool of water and a beautiful if small waterfall. I clambered to the side of the pool and started scooping up water and swallowing it down as though I had never seen water before. Instantly, all my pain and discomfort vanished as I drank more and more. I didn't even bother with ~~the canteen~~ yet, as I drank straight from the pool.		The water got louder and louder the deeper into the woods I went. I found my way into a small clearing surrounding a pool of water and a beautiful if small waterfall. I clambered to the side of the pool and started scooping up water and swallowing it down as though I had never seen water before. Instantly, all my pain and discomfort vanished as I drank more and more. I didn't even bother with thecan'teen yet, as I drank straight from the pool.

	I was alerted to the presence of another person when I heard a giggle echoing off the trees. It was a girlish giggle, but I couldn't tell where it was coming from. Glancing around, I searched for the voice when a splash from the pool drew my attention. Not far at all was the figure of someone swimming in the pool... a girl. I don't know how I missed her before, but now she had my full attention.		I was alerted to the presence of another person when I heard a giggle echoing off the trees. It was a girlish giggle, but I couldn't tell where it was coming from. Glancing around, I searched for the voice when a splash from the pool drew my attention. Not far at all was the figure of someone swimming in the pool... a girl. I don't know how I missed her before, but now she had my full attention.
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	"I’m forry!" I tried to say again. "Ny druck got shtug an I wuz firshty".		"I’m forry!" I tried to say again. "Ny druck got shtug an I wuz firshty".

	"What?" she said as she pushed her foot harder against my head. I pointed over toward ~~my canteen~~, still empty by the pool. "You have to speak up" she taunted.		"What?" she said as she pushed her foot harder against my head. I pointed over toward mycan'teen, still empty by the pool. "You have to speak up" she taunted.

	"My Truck!" I finally got out. "Thirsty... Water!"		"My Truck!" I finally got out. "Thirsty... Water!"

	She thought for a second looking between me and the pool of water, and then over at ~~my canteen~~. "So... you aren't here to stare at me?" She let up her weight a little, making it easier to talk.		She thought for a second looking between me and the pool of water, and then over at mycan'teen. "So... you aren't here to stare at me?" She let up her weight a little, making it easier to talk.

	"No... but I couldn't help myself."		"No... but I couldn't help myself."