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	"This is his main control room, where we spends most, if not all, of his time. He's bed-ridden now, but he won't be the problem; the defence systems and his personal guard will. It is likely they will double as his caretakers." She looked around the map a little and pulled another one out, indicating the floor below.		"This is his main control room, where we spends most, if not all, of his time. He's bed-ridden now, but he won't be the problem; the defence systems and his personal guard will. It is likely they will double as his caretakers." She looked around the map a little and pulled another one out, indicating the floor below.

	"Here" she said pointing at an outerwall. The layout was very similar, except the large center room now filled most of the space. "This wall will be our best bet in. There is a service door for flying armored suits hidden here, and it will let us avoid most of his outer defences. Once we block the stairs and disable the elevators, he will have no escape. We can go up to Tsion. But...". She paused and thought, seemingly frozen in place for the better half of a minute. "His computer has a strong firewall."		"Here" she said pointing at an outerwall. The layout was very similar, except the large center room now filled most of the space. "This wall will be our best bet in. There is a service door for flying armored suits hidden here, and it will let us avoid most of his outer defences. Once we block the stairs and disable the elevators, he will have no escape. We can go up to Tsion. But..." She paused and thought, seemingly frozen in place for the better half of a minute. "His computer has a strong firewall."

	"I bet it's nothing I can't take care of" Matrix boasted.		"I bet it's nothing I can't take care of" Matrix boasted.
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	"I think I can help with that" my dad spoke up. He had been listening in, even though he wasn't supposed to be privy to this private conversation. Still, May didn't object.		"I think I can help with that" my dad spoke up. He had been listening in, even though he wasn't supposed to be privy to this private conversation. Still, May didn't object.

	"I've been working on something that might help. It's... Well...". He hesitated to say, as he looked between all the girls he built. "It was my last resort and I hoped to never have to use it."		"I've been working on something that might help. It's... Well..." He hesitated to say, as he looked between all the girls he built. "It was my last resort and I hoped to never have to use it."

	"what is it?" Raster asked, her voice more tender than I expected.		"what is it?" Raster asked, her voice more tender than I expected.
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	"I can't think of anything right here, but maybe check on Matrix. And get some rest so you'll be good to go when we are ready for you."		"I can't think of anything right here, but maybe check on Matrix. And get some rest so you'll be good to go when we are ready for you."

	I nodded, "Sure.". I took one last look at Ellie before turning back to check on Lulu and Matrix. As I entered the room, Lulu sat there with Matrix's head in her lap, lightly brushing her hair.		I nodded, "Sure." I took one last look at Ellie before turning back to check on Lulu and Matrix. As I entered the room, Lulu sat there with Matrix's head in her lap, lightly brushing her hair.

	"Her hair's so short now" she noted. Matrix's new hair looked like a pixie cut.		"Her hair's so short now" she noted. Matrix's new hair looked like a pixie cut.

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	~~=Corrupted=~~		=Chapter 21 - Sisters=
	*[[Corrupted - Chapters 1-10]]
	*[[Corrupted - Chapters 11-20]]

	==Chapter 21 - Sisters==
	Her father was a tall strong man, dressed in the finest opulent suit, with a pair of small round glasses. His hair was graying at the sides that said he was experienced but not that old, and his face has creases in it that only a man who had seen his fair share of pain and would have had. His eyes and mouth looked like Laura's, although more masculine and older.		Her father was a tall strong man, dressed in the finest opulent suit, with a pair of small round glasses. His hair was graying at the sides that said he was experienced but not that old, and his face has creases in it that only a man who had seen his fair share of pain and would have had. His eyes and mouth looked like Laura's, although more masculine and older.

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	"Matrix?" Lulu asked shocked at the sight. This was getting out of hand.		"Matrix?" Lulu asked shocked at the sight. This was getting out of hand.

	==Chapter 22 - Things men shouldn't see==		=Chapter 22 - Things men shouldn't see=
	"I can explain” I uttered, realizing they sounded like the last words of a doomed man.		"I can explain” I uttered, realizing they sounded like the last words of a doomed man.

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	I knew that I was now out of place, and decided to silently take my leave. This was another one of those things a man should never see, and this time I decided to leave it that way.		I knew that I was now out of place, and decided to silently take my leave. This was another one of those things a man should never see, and this time I decided to leave it that way.

	==Chapter 23 - Calm before the Storm==		=Chapter 23 - Calm before the Storm=
	The next day couldn't get there fast enough. Try as I might, sleep was hard to come by, even with Ellie beside me. She looked like any other girl, fast asleep, while she charged. With everything that had happened the day before, my mind was running a marathon.		The next day couldn't get there fast enough. Try as I might, sleep was hard to come by, even with Ellie beside me. She looked like any other girl, fast asleep, while she charged. With everything that had happened the day before, my mind was running a marathon.

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	She was fast asleep in a few moments, breathing deeply, and her warm soft body and deep breaths calmed me and I soon drifted off. It was going to be one hell of a day tomorrow, and I had no idea what I was doing.		She was fast asleep in a few moments, breathing deeply, and her warm soft body and deep breaths calmed me and I soon drifted off. It was going to be one hell of a day tomorrow, and I had no idea what I was doing.

	==Chapter 24 - Replicated==		=Chapter 24 - Replicated=
	"Engaging the enemy, I repeat, we are engaging the enemy!"		"Engaging the enemy, I repeat, we are engaging the enemy!"

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	We looked around. Proxy was gone.		We looked around. Proxy was gone.
	==Chapter 25 - Freeman==
			=Chapter 25 - Freeman=
	We knew there wasn't much time, but we made sure to show what little respect we could. As Matrix covered Tess with a white lab coat we found nearby, we had no time to mourn our losses. There may have been no time for goodbyes right now, but at least we could show Tess some decency, unlike Lulu who was probably torn to pieces by now. It made me sick to my stomach to think about that.		We knew there wasn't much time, but we made sure to show what little respect we could. As Matrix covered Tess with a white lab coat we found nearby, we had no time to mourn our losses. There may have been no time for goodbyes right now, but at least we could show Tess some decency, unlike Lulu who was probably torn to pieces by now. It made me sick to my stomach to think about that.

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	"No telling when they might..." I began but remembered something. Reaching into my jacket pocket I recalled the device my father left me, and pulled it out. "This could work."		"No telling when they might..." I began but remembered something. Reaching into my jacket pocket I recalled the device my father left me, and pulled it out. "This could work."
	==Chapter 26 - Brain-Powered==
			=Chapter 26 - Brain-Powered=
	I approached the duplicate guards, each naked but armed with a rifle. It was a calculated risk and I had only one chance to make this work. The others stayed behind a ways, although they were prepared to come running at a moment's notice.		I approached the duplicate guards, each naked but armed with a rifle. It was a calculated risk and I had only one chance to make this work. The others stayed behind a ways, although they were prepared to come running at a moment's notice.

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	"We need to get to them now!"		"We need to get to them now!"
	==Chapter 27 - Loss==
			=Chapter 27 - Loss=
	There were literally hundreds of Matrix copies littered about the floor. Whatever Raster did, it affected all of them. It would have been far more erotic watching what looked like sexy twins and triplets in various stages of undress making out with each other, but under the circumstances I preferred to help my friends.		There were literally hundreds of Matrix copies littered about the floor. Whatever Raster did, it affected all of them. It would have been far more erotic watching what looked like sexy twins and triplets in various stages of undress making out with each other, but under the circumstances I preferred to help my friends.

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	People were celebrating as rain from my eyes poured down onto Ellie's cheek.		People were celebrating as rain from my eyes poured down onto Ellie's cheek.

	==Chapter 28 - Lending a Helping Hand==		=Chapter 28 - Lending a Helping Hand=
	The last thing I remembered was looking up at the sky in pain. Storm clouds threatened overhead while the top few floors of the skyscraper were set ablaze, lighting up the sky. All my strength had flooded out of me and I was exhausted. The sounds of indistinct voices grew distant as darkness overcame me. My shoulder hurt worse than anything I ever felt before.		The last thing I remembered was looking up at the sky in pain. Storm clouds threatened overhead while the top few floors of the skyscraper were set ablaze, lighting up the sky. All my strength had flooded out of me and I was exhausted. The sounds of indistinct voices grew distant as darkness overcame me. My shoulder hurt worse than anything I ever felt before.

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	"Right. Well, even if it is just a small chance, if it could bring Matrix back to us, I'll do it!"		"Right. Well, even if it is just a small chance, if it could bring Matrix back to us, I'll do it!"
	~~==Chapter 29 - Under the Fire==~~

			=Chapter 29 - Under the Fire=
	"What's your name?" I asked the white-haired copy.		"What's your name?" I asked the white-haired copy.

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	Time was short. We only had a few hours to make this work or risk corrupting her systems with a hard reset. It was now or never!		Time was short. We only had a few hours to make this work or risk corrupting her systems with a hard reset. It was now or never!

	==Chapter 30 - Together Again==		=Chapter 30 - Together Again=
	I wheeled Matrix through the train station on a wheel chair, dressed in the same medical-gown from before. Even though it was a cold night, I decided not to cover her up more than that, considering she was already in danger of overheating. I did have to strap her in place to keep her from falling out of the chair if she had another episode, but so far she remained unconscious. Matrix was losing the battle against her body and just didn't have the energy to resist.		I wheeled Matrix through the train station on a wheel chair, dressed in the same medical-gown from before. Even though it was a cold night, I decided not to cover her up more than that, considering she was already in danger of overheating. I did have to strap her in place to keep her from falling out of the chair if she had another episode, but so far she remained unconscious. Matrix was losing the battle against her body and just didn't have the energy to resist.

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 She smiled, handing him a coffee. "She's got more than I have. I'm sure it'll be more than enough."
 Finally, at long last, the build was done! Physically her body was completely upgraded and the tests had been run, and all that was left was the programming. I had literally no idea how long that would take, but my dad had already started working on it in what little spare time he had. He put aside a week to work on her by himself, although I was determined to join him and learn more.
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 Time was short. We only had a few hours to make this work or risk corrupting her systems with a hard reset. It was now or never!
 ==Chapter 30 - Together Again==
 I wheeled Matrix through the train station on a wheel chair, dressed in the same medical-gown from before. Even though it was a cold night, I decided not to cover her up more than that, considering she was already in danger of overheating. I did have to strap her in place to keep her from falling out of the chair if she had another episode, but so far she remained unconscious. Matrix was losing the battle against her body and just didn't have the energy to resist.

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