Freak-World: The Side Stories - Revision history

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	[[Stories\|← Story Archive]]		[[Stories\|← Story Archive]]

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	The man unscrewing Cassie's back covering began to chat away, telling him something about the skin's unusual succeptance to the arrowhead, which was not as sharp as Arnold thought it to be; but he could care less, for as the man rambled, he couldn't help but look at the suit he now held.		The man unscrewing Cassie's back covering began to chat away, telling him something about the skin's unusual succeptance to the arrowhead, which was not as sharp as Arnold thought it to be; but he could care less, for as the man rambled, he couldn't help but look at the suit he now held.

	It was a suit, truly, and one-piece designed to slip over the CTDs with the intent of accessing 'tissue damage' without spending too much of a budget; but come to think of it, the materials and textures were undoubtably no different from those used on the higher-end models, and nowhere was that more ~~noticable~~ than the face.		It was a suit, truly, and one-piece designed to slip over the CTDs with the intent of accessing 'tissue damage' without spending too much of a budget; but come to think of it, the materials and textures were undoubtably no different from those used on the higher-end models, and nowhere was that more noticeable than the face.

	Unlike the rest of the suit, the face held its shape, acting as a hyper-realistic mask to the otherwise smooth and featureless curves of the dummy's heads; being just a mask though, it was incapable of any expression other than the blank stare androids are famous for. None of that stopped it from being cute though, with its flush, cream skin framed by golden locks of hair which (along with the vacant, brown eyes) were built into the suit, it all seemed nothing like the steel-plated BJD that sat down before him; and that blank head, with nothing but two circular cameras to break the surface, helped that sense of disbelief.		Unlike the rest of the suit, the face held its shape, acting as a hyper-realistic mask to the otherwise smooth and featureless curves of the dummy's heads; being just a mask though, it was incapable of any expression other than the blank stare androids are famous for. None of that stopped it from being cute though, with its flush, cream skin framed by golden locks of hair which (along with the vacant, brown eyes) were built into the suit, it all seemed nothing like the steel-plated BJD that sat down before him; and that blank head, with nothing but two circular cameras to break the surface, helped that sense of disbelief.

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	Yet, as Cassie soon discovered, the place wasnt as abandoned as appearance suggested, for a woman no older than she stepped out from behind one of the pillars, weeping as doing so. Dressed in the same wears as Cassie, the young brunette tearfully said that her name was Olivia, and tried her best to sorrowfully speak her plight.		Yet, as Cassie soon discovered, the place wasnt as abandoned as appearance suggested, for a woman no older than she stepped out from behind one of the pillars, weeping as doing so. Dressed in the same wears as Cassie, the young brunette tearfully said that her name was Olivia, and tried her best to sorrowfully speak her plight.

	"Dear adventurer, please help me! My sister and I were traveling up the mountain to seek the Pool of Acesco, and we..we found it inside this cave. But then.a.horrible monster attacked us! My dear sister and I were separated, and I think..I think ~~shes~~ still in there!"		"Dear adventurer, please help me! My sister and I were traveling up the mountain to seek the Pool of Acesco, and we..we found it inside this cave. But then.a.horrible monster attacked us! My dear sister and I were separated, and I think..I think she's still in there!"

	Although this woman was clearly consumed in an immense grief, Cassies face showed no sign of sympathy or remorse, her lips shut and still, as if cast in an immovable mask. Regardless, Olivia still spoke.		Although this woman was clearly consumed in an immense grief, Cassies face showed no sign of sympathy or remorse, her lips shut and still, as if cast in an immovable mask. Regardless, Olivia still spoke.

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	Without saying a word, the blonde-haired warrior stepped into the mouth of the cave, and made her way towards the crags inner chambers.		Without saying a word, the blonde-haired warrior stepped into the mouth of the cave, and made her way towards the crags inner chambers.

	Olivia ~~didnt~~ watch, but instead slunk back behind the column of white, and stood still for a few moments; before the cable plugged into her back sent a jolt from the nearby wall, and thus she repeated the events of before, only without an audience to witness.		Olivia didn't watch, but instead slunk back behind the column of white, and stood still for a few moments; before the cable plugged into her back sent a jolt from the nearby wall, and thus she repeated the events of before, only without an audience to witness.

	"Please, help me! My nameis Olivia, and I am in need of your help!"		"Please, help me! My nameis Olivia, and I am in need of your help!"

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	The sight drew his gaze away from the head for a moment, and led him to a terrifying possibility: if his hands had been in that fluid, than he, along with every component within the android’s motionless body, would have been burnt to a crisp.		The sight drew his gaze away from the head for a moment, and led him to a terrifying possibility: if his hands had been in that fluid, than he, along with every component within the android’s motionless body, would have been burnt to a crisp.

	The noise awoke Twinkle, whose ~~miniscule~~ body had fallen into stand-by mode during the entire operation. Her body fumbled around on the shelf up ahead, for she wished she could see what the commotion was all about, yet was unable to thanks to the doctor.		The noise awoke Twinkle, whose minuscule body had fallen into stand-by mode during the entire operation. Her body fumbled around on the shelf up ahead, for she wished she could see what the commotion was all about, yet was unable to thanks to the doctor.

	“Wha….What was that noise? What’s going on Mellie?”		“Wha….What was that noise? What’s going on Mellie?”

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	Freak-World: Side-Story A: Defrost		Freak-World: Side-Story A: Defrost

Spaz at 03:13, 20 January 2015

2015-01-20T03:13:26Z

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Spaz: New page: =Defrost= Freak-World: Side-Story A: Defrost Written by Muzzleruffels Commissioned by Kishin ------------ It was a typical day within the solo-lab of Dr Melankhov; and by typical, I mean...

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New page: =Defrost= Freak-World: Side-Story A: Defrost Written by Muzzleruffels Commissioned by Kishin ------------ It was a typical day within the solo-lab of Dr Melankhov; and by typical, I mean...