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	Jack’s rifle kicked rapidly against his shoulder as it spat supersonic slugs into the exposed search party. Three droids exploded within the first split second and two more were severely damaged. He shifted his fire onto a second grouping and traced a line of slugs across their midsections. Two more went down in a shower of sparks before the group could return fire.		Jack’s rifle kicked rapidly against his shoulder as it spat supersonic slugs into the exposed search party. Three droids exploded within the first split second and two more were severely damaged. He shifted his fire onto a second grouping and traced a line of slugs across their midsections. Two more went down in a shower of sparks before the group could return fire.

	The first shots were wild and random, but they soon started to bracket Jack’s fortified position. He quickly recognized that he was being pinned down while two other droids swung wide to flank him. He drained his magazine on one of the flanking groups and put one down before he ducked behind the wall. He quickly slapped in a new magazine, and pulled a grenade off his vest. He made a mental judgment where the main group was hold up, pulled the pin, then tossed the grenade. He waited a split second for the droids to see the incoming munitions then popped up and hosed the fleeing droids. The attack left all but one a sparking mess on the ground. Then out of the corner of his eye, he saw someone come around the corner of his wall. With ~~lightening~~ speed, he spun his rifle around and popped a quick burst into the attacker. Two shots in the chest and one in the head, put her down as a laser blast shot right over his head.		The first shots were wild and random, but they soon started to bracket Jack’s fortified position. He quickly recognized that he was being pinned down while two other droids swung wide to flank him. He drained his magazine on one of the flanking groups and put one down before he ducked behind the wall. He quickly slapped in a new magazine, and pulled a grenade off his vest. He made a mental judgment where the main group was hold up, pulled the pin, then tossed the grenade. He waited a split second for the droids to see the incoming munitions then popped up and hosed the fleeing droids. The attack left all but one a sparking mess on the ground. Then out of the corner of his eye, he saw someone come around the corner of his wall. With lightning speed, he spun his rifle around and popped a quick burst into the attacker. Two shots in the chest and one in the head, put her down as a laser blast shot right over his head.

	Jack spun around to confront the new attacker. He got off a few wild shots before the enemy could fire again. The laser blast caught Jack right in his rifle, which partially blew out in his hands. Fortunately, one of his shots had hit the attacking android’s and blew its weapon arm clean off. Jack’s was shocked by the explosion but shook it off quickly. Using his left hand, he quickly drew his sidearm and put half a dozen shots into his opponent until he hit the power core and blew it apart.		Jack spun around to confront the new attacker. He got off a few wild shots before the enemy could fire again. The laser blast caught Jack right in his rifle, which partially blew out in his hands. Fortunately, one of his shots had hit the attacking android’s and blew its weapon arm clean off. Jack’s was shocked by the explosion but shook it off quickly. Using his left hand, he quickly drew his sidearm and put half a dozen shots into his opponent until he hit the power core and blew it apart.

Spaz at 23:17, 23 October 2019

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	Erica finally stopped crawling, and removed a small tool from her belt. She used the pen sized device to emit a small laser and slice through the walls of the air duct. When she finished cutting a hole, she quietly pulled the metal back exposing an old dusty room. She dropped into the room and Jack followed suit.		Erica finally stopped crawling, and removed a small tool from her belt. She used the pen sized device to emit a small laser and slice through the walls of the air duct. When she finished cutting a hole, she quietly pulled the metal back exposing an old dusty room. She dropped into the room and Jack followed suit.

	“We can rest here for a little while,” Erica said as she removed a ~~smallcan'teen~~ and handed it to Jack.		“We can rest here for a little while,” Erica said as she removed a small canteen and handed it to Jack.

	“Thanks,” Jack croaked as he drained ~~thecan'teen~~ in a few long swigs. “And thanks for saving me before. I would be dead if it wasn’t for you. I do appreciate it.”		“Thanks,” Jack croaked as he drained the canteen in a few long swigs. “And thanks for saving me before. I would be dead if it wasn’t for you. I do appreciate it.”

	“You are welcome,” Erica said with a small smile. “You are probably wondering why I am helping you.”		“You are welcome,” Erica said with a small smile. “You are probably wondering why I am helping you.”
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	“Are you ok sir?” Tarnoski asked.		“Are you ok sir?” Tarnoski asked.

	“I am a little banged up but I will be fine,” Jack replied. A corporal offered him ~~acan'teen~~ which he eagerly accepted and guzzled. “Thanks,” he gasped as he returned the empty bottle.		“I am a little banged up but I will be fine,” Jack replied. A corporal offered him a canteen which he eagerly accepted and guzzled. “Thanks,” he gasped as he returned the empty bottle.

	“Wait!” Jack cried, “what about my co-pilot. We can’t leave without Morgan.”		“Wait!” Jack cried, “what about my co-pilot. We can’t leave without Morgan.”

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	Erica finally stopped crawling, and removed a small tool from her belt. She used the pen sized device to emit a small laser and slice through the walls of the air duct. When she finished cutting a hole, she quietly pulled the metal back exposing an old dusty room. She dropped into the room and Jack followed suit.		Erica finally stopped crawling, and removed a small tool from her belt. She used the pen sized device to emit a small laser and slice through the walls of the air duct. When she finished cutting a hole, she quietly pulled the metal back exposing an old dusty room. She dropped into the room and Jack followed suit.

	“We can rest here for a little while,” Erica said as she removed a ~~small canteen~~ and handed it to Jack.		“We can rest here for a little while,” Erica said as she removed a smallcan'teen and handed it to Jack.

	“Thanks,” Jack croaked as he drained ~~the canteen~~ in a few long swigs. “And thanks for saving me before. I would be dead if it wasn’t for you. I do appreciate it.”		“Thanks,” Jack croaked as he drained thecan'teen in a few long swigs. “And thanks for saving me before. I would be dead if it wasn’t for you. I do appreciate it.”

	“You are welcome,” Erica said with a small smile. “You are probably wondering why I am helping you.”		“You are welcome,” Erica said with a small smile. “You are probably wondering why I am helping you.”
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	“Are you ok sir?” Tarnoski asked.		“Are you ok sir?” Tarnoski asked.

	“I am a little banged up but I will be fine,” Jack replied. A corporal offered him ~~a canteen~~ which he eagerly accepted and guzzled. “Thanks,” he gasped as he returned the empty bottle.		“I am a little banged up but I will be fine,” Jack replied. A corporal offered him acan'teen which he eagerly accepted and guzzled. “Thanks,” he gasped as he returned the empty bottle.

	“Wait!” Jack cried, “what about my co-pilot. We can’t leave without Morgan.”		“Wait!” Jack cried, “what about my co-pilot. We can’t leave without Morgan.”

The Liar at 17:27, 11 May 2010

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2008-09-01T15:07:50Z

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