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	The Season 1 finale begins in March, when “A Criminal Mind” hits Fembot Central!		The Season 1 finale begins in March, when “A Criminal Mind” hits Fembot Central!
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	“If we get Vicki to the closest one,” Mark Perkins interjected, “Faceless will be able to follow her there, wreck shop and kill as many people as he needs to just to make his point.” He steepled his fingers and leaned back in his chair; “I say we send out decoy vans,” he suggested. “One fleet to each of our least-secured---as in, abandoned---factories, and one for our most-secured factories. He hits the least secured ones, he gets bupkiss. He hits the most secured ones…and he’ll get hit with a whole lot more than just a few dozen charges of criminal trespass.” He folded his arms, nodding his approval of the idea. “Hell, we could say that Vicki’s at Silicon Dynamics---he’d be foaming at the mouth to finish her off there, but the only ‘bots he’d find are a bunch of pissed-off pleasure droids waiting to tear him limb-from-limb---“		“If we get Vicki to the closest one,” Mark Perkins interjected, “Faceless will be able to follow her there, wreck shop and kill as many people as he needs to just to make his point.” He steepled his fingers and leaned back in his chair; “I say we send out decoy vans,” he suggested. “One fleet to each of our least-secured---as in, abandoned---factories, and one for our most-secured factories. He hits the least secured ones, he gets bupkiss. He hits the most secured ones…and he’ll get hit with a whole lot more than just a few dozen charges of criminal trespass.” He folded his arms, nodding his approval of the idea. “Hell, we could say that Vicki’s at Silicon Dynamics---he’d be foaming at the mouth to finish her off there, but the only ‘bots he’d find are a bunch of pissed-off pleasure droids waiting to tear him limb-from-limb---“

	“And then we’d have a whole new can of worms on our hands,” Conroy finished. “The ALPA’s current take on the Three Laws state that a sentient robot can, of its free will, incapacitate---with or without the use of lethal force---any individual whose presence, actions and/or ~~existance~~ creates a clear and present danger to every human being within the robot’s vicinity---and Faceless most definitely applies. That being said, Vicki had an excuse to kill him because his actions affected her directly---if any of your ‘bots attack him---“		“And then we’d have a whole new can of worms on our hands,” Conroy finished. “The ALPA’s current take on the Three Laws state that a sentient robot can, of its free will, incapacitate---with or without the use of lethal force---any individual whose presence, actions and/or existence creates a clear and present danger to every human being within the robot’s vicinity---and Faceless most definitely applies. That being said, Vicki had an excuse to kill him because his actions affected her directly---if any of your ‘bots attack him---“

	An abrupt cough from Tell interrupted the debate before it could get ugly. “Nobody’s going to sic their ‘bots on Faceless until we get Vicki repaired,” he reminded the group. “Greg, call the plant and tell them to have every available Prix unit on security detail---non-lethal weapons only….you do have non-lethal gear, right?”		An abrupt cough from Tell interrupted the debate before it could get ugly. “Nobody’s going to sic their ‘bots on Faceless until we get Vicki repaired,” he reminded the group. “Greg, call the plant and tell them to have every available Prix unit on security detail---non-lethal weapons only….you do have non-lethal gear, right?”
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	The masked sociopath barely flinched from the blow, but it gave Jamie enough time to head in the direction he’d thrown the paring knife earlier---		The masked sociopath barely flinched from the blow, but it gave Jamie enough time to head in the direction he’d thrown the paring knife earlier---

	---except every light in the room flared back into ~~existance~~ at once, temporarily blinding him.		---except every light in the room flared back into existence at once, temporarily blinding him.

	Those critical few seconds were all it took for Faceless to close the gap between himself and Vicki’s brother, grabbing him by the collar and sending him head-first into a metal cabinet door. A smear of blood trailed down the metallic surface as Jamie sank to the floor; “A few more hits like that one,” Faceless casually remarked, “and you’ll be certifiably concussed in minutes…” Another dry, sinister chuckle punctuated his words; “Of course,” he added, “my way is more fun---“		Those critical few seconds were all it took for Faceless to close the gap between himself and Vicki’s brother, grabbing him by the collar and sending him head-first into a metal cabinet door. A smear of blood trailed down the metallic surface as Jamie sank to the floor; “A few more hits like that one,” Faceless casually remarked, “and you’ll be certifiably concussed in minutes…” Another dry, sinister chuckle punctuated his words; “Of course,” he added, “my way is more fun---“
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	“Or I’ll what?”		“Or I’ll what?”

	One by one, the lights in the room clicked on. “Y’know, Dad,” Vicki’s voice chided from every speaker in the room, “you really need to do something about this anxiety of yours…you always expect the worst, when you should be looking forward to the best.” The lights over the slab blazed back into ~~existance~~, revealing a peaceful smile on Vicki’s face.		One by one, the lights in the room clicked on. “Y’know, Dad,” Vicki’s voice chided from every speaker in the room, “you really need to do something about this anxiety of yours…you always expect the worst, when you should be looking forward to the best.” The lights over the slab blazed back into existence, revealing a peaceful smile on Vicki’s face.

	“Vicki?” Ted gasped. “Is it…really you?!”		“Vicki?” Ted gasped. “Is it…really you?!”

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	…but not even that illusion of peace, however beautiful it might’ve been, could hide the truth.		…but not even that illusion of peace, however beautiful it might’ve been, could hide the truth.

	For one, the same light that caught her eyes also showed off the gasping, stunned expression that had been frozen on her face since a few hours before. Further, more ~~noticable~~ proof could be seen right above her eyes---the vicious stab would in her forehead, a jarring reminder of the fate that had befallen her. Another such wound, this one right through her heart (or rather, where her heart would’ve been), had already been covered…nothing more could be done to repair it for now.		For one, the same light that caught her eyes also showed off the gasping, stunned expression that had been frozen on her face since a few hours before. Further, more noticeable proof could be seen right above her eyes---the vicious stab would in her forehead, a jarring reminder of the fate that had befallen her. Another such wound, this one right through her heart (or rather, where her heart would’ve been), had already been covered…nothing more could be done to repair it for now.

	Only the Eleven could fix the damage.		Only the Eleven could fix the damage.

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	“This is no trick, monster,” Oberon coldly replied. “This is the part where I kill you.”		“This is no trick, monster,” Oberon coldly replied. “This is the part where I kill you.”

	As Vicki watched, simultaneously awed and terrified, Oberon charged at the figure of the Faceless Nightmare and swung the massive claymore as if it were a baseball bat. The blade hit the Nightmare’s abdomen---and connected, to the surprise of the gynoid. “Er, der durch helle Furcht nicht die Schwärzung reist und er,” the white-armored warrior intoned, “der in der Schwärzung lebt, sterben im Licht.”		As Vicki watched, simultaneously awed and terrified, Oberon charged at the figure of the Faceless Nightmare and swung the massive claymore as if it were a baseball bat. The blade hit the Nightmare’s abdomen---and connected, to the surprise of the gynoid. “Er, der durch helle Furcht nicht die Schwärzung reist und er,” the white-armored warrior intoned, “der in der Schwärzung lebt, sterben I'm Licht.”

	I’m hearing German because---because---FOCUS! Vicki cleared her thoughts; he’s talking in German because my processors are still sorting themselves out, she realized. This is too too too…never mind.		I’m hearing German because---because---FOCUS! Vicki cleared her thoughts; he’s talking in German because my processors are still sorting themselves out, she realized. This is too too too…never mind.

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	Those critical few seconds were all it took for Faceless to close the gap between himself and Vicki’s brother, grabbing him by the collar and sending him head-first into a metal cabinet door. A smear of blood trailed down the metallic surface as Jamie sank to the floor; “A few more hits like that one,” Faceless casually remarked, “and you’ll be certifiably concussed in minutes…” Another dry, sinister chuckle punctuated his words; “Of course,” he added, “my way is more fun---“		Those critical few seconds were all it took for Faceless to close the gap between himself and Vicki’s brother, grabbing him by the collar and sending him head-first into a metal cabinet door. A smear of blood trailed down the metallic surface as Jamie sank to the floor; “A few more hits like that one,” Faceless casually remarked, “and you’ll be certifiably concussed in minutes…” Another dry, sinister chuckle punctuated his words; “Of course,” he added, “my way is more fun---“

	Something bit into his ankle, terminating his taunt in a shocked gasp. A brief glance at his now-injured leg revealed the culprit: the paring knife he’d told Jamie to use ~~agaisnt~~ Kylie a few minutes earlier.		Something bit into his ankle, terminating his taunt in a shocked gasp. A brief glance at his now-injured leg revealed the culprit: the paring knife he’d told Jamie to use against Kylie a few minutes earlier.

	“How’s that for fun,” Jamie hissed, “you sick fu---“		“How’s that for fun,” Jamie hissed, “you sick fu---“

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	Not surprisingly, the Nightmare laughed off the threat. [I will NEVER leave---]		Not surprisingly, the Nightmare laughed off the threat. [I will NEVER leave---]

	“Really?” The voice of Inspektor 12 ~~preceeded~~ a brutal axe kick to the Nightmare’s head. “Well, then, I guess we’ll have to get a bit more…aggressive with our negotiations, won’t we?”		“Really?” The voice of Inspektor 12 preceded a brutal axe kick to the Nightmare’s head. “Well, then, I guess we’ll have to get a bit more…aggressive with our negotiations, won’t we?”

	As Lawson’s Eleven used every antivirus trick they knew of, Vicki found herself somehow being made whole once again. So…this is---is---is it, then…the part where IIIIIIIIIIII----		As Lawson’s Eleven used every antivirus trick they knew of, Vicki found herself somehow being made whole once again. So…this is---is---is it, then…the part where IIIIIIIIIIII----

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