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Spaz: Text replacement - " type=comment editintro=Extension:InputBox/editintro comment preload=Extension:InputBox/preload hidden=yes default=Extension talk:InputBox buttonlabel=Post a comment on the talk page " to "{{Template:AddComment-Story|{{PAGENAME}}}}"

2020-04-26T06:25:00Z

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	“We'll see,” was all he could say. And before Diane made it back out, Mike and his team had left.		“We'll see,” was all he could say. And before Diane made it back out, Mike and his team had left.
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Spaz: Text replacement - "Back to the story archive" to "← Story Archive"

2019-12-29T23:53:05Z

Text replacement - "Back to the story archive" to "← Story Archive"

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Spaz: Text replacement - " shes " to " she's "

2019-10-23T23:53:03Z

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	“whatever.”		“whatever.”
	“You really won't have to do much of anything to take care of her, she is after all created to take care you, not the other way around. If anything happens that you need to help her to fix she will notify you or contact us through her wireless connection, and then we will be there to fix the problem. You wont have to do more than pick up a phone really.”		“You really won't have to do much of anything to take care of her, she is after all created to take care you, not the other way around. If anything happens that you need to help her to fix she will notify you or contact us through her wireless connection, and then we will be there to fix the problem. You wont have to do more than pick up a phone really.”
	John just shook his head slowly, as he stared into his friends eyes, “can't you see that, that isn't companionship, it's slavery. I can't even sugar coat it, and say ~~shes~~ a house keeper, because they get paid,” he practically yelled the last word. “You can't ask me to treat it as a human, and then be ok with having it working in my home like a slave. But I'm going to do this for you, but after two weeks its gone.”		John just shook his head slowly, as he stared into his friends eyes, “can't you see that, that isn't companionship, it's slavery. I can't even sugar coat it, and say she's a house keeper, because they get paid,” he practically yelled the last word. “You can't ask me to treat it as a human, and then be ok with having it working in my home like a slave. But I'm going to do this for you, but after two weeks its gone.”
	“Ok, john. First I have to tell you, two weeks is the minimum, but if you should decide to keep her around the contract ends after 3 months. At that point you have to return her, should you decide that you want to keep her we will have to send you another, as she will be kept here and her memory of her interactions with you recorded for our records. Any model sent to you after that point will keep all of the information of your interactions private. Once they are on sale the privacy of our customers is of the utmost importance, but since you not paying for the first model, she essentially remains the Property of Dyna-tech.” He slid the papers over to John as he finished, “Now if you could just read and sign this, ill go over all her features and she should arrive within a week... and thank you John, I really feel this will help you.” John just gave him a weak smile as he reached over and began to read his contract.		“Ok, john. First I have to tell you, two weeks is the minimum, but if you should decide to keep her around the contract ends after 3 months. At that point you have to return her, should you decide that you want to keep her we will have to send you another, as she will be kept here and her memory of her interactions with you recorded for our records. Any model sent to you after that point will keep all of the information of your interactions private. Once they are on sale the privacy of our customers is of the utmost importance, but since you not paying for the first model, she essentially remains the Property of Dyna-tech.” He slid the papers over to John as he finished, “Now if you could just read and sign this, ill go over all her features and she should arrive within a week... and thank you John, I really feel this will help you.” John just gave him a weak smile as he reached over and began to read his contract.

Spaz: Text replacement - " i " to " I "

2019-10-23T23:26:35Z

Text replacement - " i " to " I "

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	“Lions are losing again, of course,” he sighed to himself as he settled in to watch his favorite team lose again. About an hour later there was a knock at his door, “Hm Mike must be coming to check up on me since I haven't said anything to him about her yet.” He groaned as he noticed he referred to it as a she again. The knock on the door sounded out again, this time much louder than the last. He was about half way to the door, when Mike came barging through, he looked to each side of him as he entered the house. The dining room which was attached to the kitchen was to his right and john was to his left in the living room. He wave an arm hurriedly toward the kitchen, then immediately turned to John and walked purposefully toward him. Three people followed behind him carrying crates and large metal suit cases, but they went into the kitchen. Mike grabbed him up by the collar and started shoving him toward the door, before long they were outside. He couldn't believe Mike was doing this, he was about six foot even and about a hundred eighty pounds, which essentially made him the size of john. Mike was in good shape, but john was a big guy, even if he had let himself go. It wasn't to long ago people had said he was a monster.		“Lions are losing again, of course,” he sighed to himself as he settled in to watch his favorite team lose again. About an hour later there was a knock at his door, “Hm Mike must be coming to check up on me since I haven't said anything to him about her yet.” He groaned as he noticed he referred to it as a she again. The knock on the door sounded out again, this time much louder than the last. He was about half way to the door, when Mike came barging through, he looked to each side of him as he entered the house. The dining room which was attached to the kitchen was to his right and john was to his left in the living room. He wave an arm hurriedly toward the kitchen, then immediately turned to John and walked purposefully toward him. Three people followed behind him carrying crates and large metal suit cases, but they went into the kitchen. Mike grabbed him up by the collar and started shoving him toward the door, before long they were outside. He couldn't believe Mike was doing this, he was about six foot even and about a hundred eighty pounds, which essentially made him the size of john. Mike was in good shape, but john was a big guy, even if he had let himself go. It wasn't to long ago people had said he was a monster.
	"Whoa, what are you doing man," he said, surprised by Mikes anger		"Whoa, what are you doing man," he said, surprised by Mikes anger
	"Why am i getting message from your companion, that she is broken and unable to perform her tasks properly? That shecan't stop making you angry?" He didn't wait for john to answer, he just continued his vocal assault.		"Why am I getting message from your companion, that she is broken and unable to perform her tasks properly? That shecan't stop making you angry?" He didn't wait for john to answer, he just continued his vocal assault.

Spaz: Text replacement - " cant" to "can't"

2019-10-23T23:15:53Z

Text replacement - " cant" to "can't"

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	“Lions are losing again, of course,” he sighed to himself as he settled in to watch his favorite team lose again. About an hour later there was a knock at his door, “Hm Mike must be coming to check up on me since I haven't said anything to him about her yet.” He groaned as he noticed he referred to it as a she again. The knock on the door sounded out again, this time much louder than the last. He was about half way to the door, when Mike came barging through, he looked to each side of him as he entered the house. The dining room which was attached to the kitchen was to his right and john was to his left in the living room. He wave an arm hurriedly toward the kitchen, then immediately turned to John and walked purposefully toward him. Three people followed behind him carrying crates and large metal suit cases, but they went into the kitchen. Mike grabbed him up by the collar and started shoving him toward the door, before long they were outside. He couldn't believe Mike was doing this, he was about six foot even and about a hundred eighty pounds, which essentially made him the size of john. Mike was in good shape, but john was a big guy, even if he had let himself go. It wasn't to long ago people had said he was a monster.		“Lions are losing again, of course,” he sighed to himself as he settled in to watch his favorite team lose again. About an hour later there was a knock at his door, “Hm Mike must be coming to check up on me since I haven't said anything to him about her yet.” He groaned as he noticed he referred to it as a she again. The knock on the door sounded out again, this time much louder than the last. He was about half way to the door, when Mike came barging through, he looked to each side of him as he entered the house. The dining room which was attached to the kitchen was to his right and john was to his left in the living room. He wave an arm hurriedly toward the kitchen, then immediately turned to John and walked purposefully toward him. Three people followed behind him carrying crates and large metal suit cases, but they went into the kitchen. Mike grabbed him up by the collar and started shoving him toward the door, before long they were outside. He couldn't believe Mike was doing this, he was about six foot even and about a hundred eighty pounds, which essentially made him the size of john. Mike was in good shape, but john was a big guy, even if he had let himself go. It wasn't to long ago people had said he was a monster.
	"Whoa, what are you doing man," he said, surprised by Mikes anger		"Whoa, what are you doing man," he said, surprised by Mikes anger
	"Why am i getting message from your companion, that she is broken and unable to perform her tasks properly? That ~~she cant~~ stop making you angry?" He didn't wait for john to answer, he just continued his vocal assault.		"Why am i getting message from your companion, that she is broken and unable to perform her tasks properly? That shecan't stop making you angry?" He didn't wait for john to answer, he just continued his vocal assault.

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2014-08-27T20:36:32Z

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