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	''' ''The End -- For Now'' '''		''' ''The End -- For Now'' '''

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	A ringing sound echoed in her ears as a metallic voice began to call out, "''It's morning, Rinrin-chan! It's morning! Time to get up! Time to get up!''"		A ringing sound echoed in her ears as a metallic voice began to call out, "''It's morning, Rinrin-chan! It's morning! Time to get up! Time to get up!''"
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	"Right," Rinrin said as she flipped on the water . . .		"Right," Rinrin said as she flipped on the water . . .

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	After a hearty breakfast and a quick review of her day's schedule on her BlackBerry, Rinrin got dressed in a pair of jeans and a plain T-shirt before getting her bag and heading out of her rented home to the Corvette she had purchased on coming to Nova Scotia and modified with her own home-designed AI systems when she began attending Dalhousie after graduating from Stargazer West College. "Ohayô, Louie," she called out as the door automatically opened and she slipped in. "McGovern-sensei's clinic, near the University, please. Most economical route," she then instructed.		After a hearty breakfast and a quick review of her day's schedule on her BlackBerry, Rinrin got dressed in a pair of jeans and a plain T-shirt before getting her bag and heading out of her rented home to the Corvette she had purchased on coming to Nova Scotia and modified with her own home-designed AI systems when she began attending Dalhousie after graduating from Stargazer West College. "Ohayô, Louie," she called out as the door automatically opened and she slipped in. "McGovern-sensei's clinic, near the University, please. Most economical route," she then instructed.
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	As she put her computer onto her lap to get back to her notes, her eyes then locked on a sign on a nearby table piled with magazines: '''FOR YOUR CONVENIENCE, THIS CLINIC IS CURRENTLY ASSISTING IN BETA TRIALS ON THE EASTMAN-KODAK TYPE 86F-N NURSE DROID. PLEASE BE PATIENT IF MALFUNCTIONS OCCUR; SOME SYSTEMS ARE STILL IN TESTING STAGE.''' Noting that, Rinrin shrugged; she knew some of the people at Dalhousie who were helping out with the EK 86F-Ns, which were originally designed at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology in Boston. Knowing the collective IQs of some of those brainiacs, she then smirked. The bugs, if present, would be minor things . . .		As she put her computer onto her lap to get back to her notes, her eyes then locked on a sign on a nearby table piled with magazines: '''FOR YOUR CONVENIENCE, THIS CLINIC IS CURRENTLY ASSISTING IN BETA TRIALS ON THE EASTMAN-KODAK TYPE 86F-N NURSE DROID. PLEASE BE PATIENT IF MALFUNCTIONS OCCUR; SOME SYSTEMS ARE STILL IN TESTING STAGE.''' Noting that, Rinrin shrugged; she knew some of the people at Dalhousie who were helping out with the EK 86F-Ns, which were originally designed at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology in Boston. Knowing the collective IQs of some of those brainiacs, she then smirked. The bugs, if present, would be minor things . . .

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	An hour later, Rinrin had returned to the examination room where Heather had brought her, the Aniki Special in her lap as she looked over some of her notes. The door then opened, revealing Patricia McGovern, Heather right behind her. The doctor and the nurse both looked spiffy and professional, though their blouses were unbuttoned to allow the area of skin where their main diagnostic ports were located to be exposed. As Heather placed herself at her normal location by the end of the bed to await the doctor's command, Rinrin looked up, and then set the laptop aside as she gazed in concern at the doctor. Patricia herself had a pensive look on her face. Silence fell over the scene as they looked on each other, and then the doctor lowered her eyes. "I'm sorry for deceiving you like that, Rinrin," she apologised. "A lot of humans have problems with artificial intelligences like myself serving as doctors. If you wish to switch to a different family doctor, of course . . . "		An hour later, Rinrin had returned to the examination room where Heather had brought her, the Aniki Special in her lap as she looked over some of her notes. The door then opened, revealing Patricia McGovern, Heather right behind her. The doctor and the nurse both looked spiffy and professional, though their blouses were unbuttoned to allow the area of skin where their main diagnostic ports were located to be exposed. As Heather placed herself at her normal location by the end of the bed to await the doctor's command, Rinrin looked up, and then set the laptop aside as she gazed in concern at the doctor. Patricia herself had a pensive look on her face. Silence fell over the scene as they looked on each other, and then the doctor lowered her eyes. "I'm sorry for deceiving you like that, Rinrin," she apologised. "A lot of humans have problems with artificial intelligences like myself serving as doctors. If you wish to switch to a different family doctor, of course . . . "

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	''1) Rinrin is a character from the bishôjo date simulation game (later anime series) ''Sister Princess - Onii-chan Daisuki,'' created by Sakurako Kimino (creator of ''Strawberry Panic!'') and illustrated by Naoto Tenhiro; it first appeared in the pages of ''Dengeki G's Magazine'' in 1999. So as to not offend the sensibilities of those who might read this, Rinrin is depicted in her university years, about seven years after the timeline of the game (which would make her 22 years old). In previous fanfics I've written using her as one of the characters, I've always used the family name "Hatoyama" (written with the kanji meaning "dove mountain") in conjunction with her.		''1) Rinrin is a character from the bishôjo date simulation game (later anime series) ''Sister Princess - Onii-chan Daisuki,'' created by Sakurako Kimino (creator of ''Strawberry Panic!'') and illustrated by Naoto Tenhiro; it first appeared in the pages of ''Dengeki G's Magazine'' in 1999. So as to not offend the sensibilities of those who might read this, Rinrin is depicted in her university years, about seven years after the timeline of the game (which would make her 22 years old). In previous fanfics I've written using her as one of the characters, I've always used the family name "Hatoyama" (written with the kanji meaning "dove mountain") in conjunction with her.

	''2) This story is also based on Sarabot's ''The Robotic Nurse,'' which can be found at the Fembot Central website in the Story Archive section, under topic #2781. To be frankly honest, I've never liked stories where gynoids have been made to malfunction and then just left there while the protagonist (who, for one reason or another, caused the malfunction) does nothing to correct the problem or skips out of the scene and leaves a mess. This story is meant to offer a different ending to that scenario.''		''2) This story is also based on Sarabot's ''[[The Robotic Nurse]],'' which can be found at the Fembot Central website in the Story Archive section, under topic #2781. To be frankly honest, I've never liked stories where gynoids have been made to malfunction and then just left there while the protagonist (who, for one reason or another, caused the malfunction) does nothing to correct the problem or skips out of the scene and leaves a mess. This story is meant to offer a different ending to that scenario.''

	''And now . . .''		''And now . . .''

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	'''RINRIN AND THE DOCTOR'S APPOINTMENT'''		'''RINRIN AND THE DOCTOR'S APPOINTMENT''' by Gorgo
	By Gorgo

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	''1) Rinrin is a character from the bishôjo date simulation game (later anime series) ''Sister Princess - Onii-chan Daisuki,'' created by Sakurako Kimino (creator of ''Strawberry Panic!'') and illustrated by Naoto Tenhiro; it first appeared in the pages of ''Dengeki G's Magazine'' in 1999. So as to not offend the sensibilities of those who might read this, Rinrin is depicted in her university years, about seven years after the timeline of the game (which would make her 22 years old). In previous fanfics I've written using her as one of the characters, I've always used the family name "Hatoyama" (written with the kanji meaning "dove mountain") in conjunction with her.		''1) Rinrin is a character from the bishôjo date simulation game (later anime series) ''Sister Princess - Onii-chan Daisuki,'' created by Sakurako Kimino (creator of ''Strawberry Panic!'') and illustrated by Naoto Tenhiro; it first appeared in the pages of ''Dengeki G's Magazine'' in 1999. So as to not offend the sensibilities of those who might read this, Rinrin is depicted in her university years, about seven years after the timeline of the game (which would make her 22 years old). In previous fanfics I've written using her as one of the characters, I've always used the family name "Hatoyama" (written with the kanji meaning "dove mountain") in conjunction with her.

	2) This story is also based on Sarabot's ''The Robotic Nurse,'' which can be found at the Fembot Central website in the Story Archive section, under topic #2781. To be frankly honest, I've never liked stories where gynoids have been made to malfunction and then just left there while the protagonist (who, for one reason or another, caused the malfunction) does nothing to correct the problem or skips out of the scene and leaves a mess. This story is meant to offer a different ending to that scenario.		''2) This story is also based on Sarabot's ''The Robotic Nurse,'' which can be found at the Fembot Central website in the Story Archive section, under topic #2781. To be frankly honest, I've never liked stories where gynoids have been made to malfunction and then just left there while the protagonist (who, for one reason or another, caused the malfunction) does nothing to correct the problem or skips out of the scene and leaves a mess. This story is meant to offer a different ending to that scenario.''

	And now . . .''		''And now . . .''

	A ringing sound echoed in her ears as a metallic voice began to call out, "It's morning, Rinrin-chan! It's morning! Time to get up! Time to get up!"		A ringing sound echoed in her ears as a metallic voice began to call out, "''It's morning, Rinrin-chan! It's morning! Time to get up! Time to get up!''"

	A moan escaped the mass of blankets on the bunk bed, located in a private bedroom in a Martello tower-like building on a plot of land in the hills overlooking the outer reaches of Halifax Harbour. Hand moved the covers away to reveal a woman in her early twenties, currently covered in a Boston Celtics muscle shirt that barely went past her panty-clad crotch. Oriental in looks with a mixture of Japanese and Chinese ancestry on her cute face, she had bobcut dark brown hair that went to the level of her chin and deep brown eyes. As she reached over to tap the control to shut off the alarm on the miniature robot on her nightstand, she was quick to see the time. "Seven-thirty . . . " Rinrin Hatoyama moaned before she covered her mouth in a polite yawn. "Damn . . . still too early."		A moan escaped the mass of blankets on the bunk bed, located in a private bedroom in a Martello tower-like building on a plot of land in the hills overlooking the outer reaches of Halifax Harbour. Hand moved the covers away to reveal a woman in her early twenties, currently covered in a Boston Celtics muscle shirt that barely went past her panty-clad crotch. Oriental in looks with a mixture of Japanese and Chinese ancestry on her cute face, she had bobcut dark brown hair that went to the level of her chin and deep brown eyes. As she reached over to tap the control to shut off the alarm on the miniature robot on her nightstand, she was quick to see the time. "Seven-thirty . . . " Rinrin Hatoyama moaned before she covered her mouth in a polite yawn. "Damn . . . still too early."
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	After a hearty breakfast and a quick review of her day's schedule on her BlackBerry, Rinrin got dressed in a pair of jeans and a plain T-shirt before getting her bag and heading out of her rented home to the Corvette she had purchased on coming to Nova Scotia and modified with her own home-designed AI systems when she began attending Dalhousie after graduating from Stargazer West College. "Ohayô, Louie," she called out as the door automatically opened and she slipped in. "McGovern-sensei's clinic, near the University, please. Most economical route," she then instructed.		After a hearty breakfast and a quick review of her day's schedule on her BlackBerry, Rinrin got dressed in a pair of jeans and a plain T-shirt before getting her bag and heading out of her rented home to the Corvette she had purchased on coming to Nova Scotia and modified with her own home-designed AI systems when she began attending Dalhousie after graduating from Stargazer West College. "Ohayô, Louie," she called out as the door automatically opened and she slipped in. "McGovern-sensei's clinic, near the University, please. Most economical route," she then instructed.

	"Right away, Rinrin-chan," the voice of the Corvette's AI -- Rinrin modelled that on the voice of one of Donald Duck's nephews -- replied as the engine turned over.		"''Right away, Rinrin-chan,''" the voice of the Corvette's AI -- Rinrin modelled that on the voice of one of Donald Duck's nephews -- replied as the engine turned over.

	Rinrin buckled in as the car went off. Given the growth of the metropolitan Halifax region over the last few decades, she knew it would take nearly an hour to get into town and Patricia McGovern's clinic, located to the north of the grounds of Dalhousie University. While Louie was actually doing the driving, Rinrin got out her Aniki Special laptop and began running through her notes for her various graduate year classes. Fortunately for her, today was a day she only had one class with a following seminar -- Artificial Cognation 447 -- at Dalhousie, so she could relax herself and take time to work on some of her pending research essays and seminar presentations.		Rinrin buckled in as the car went off. Given the growth of the metropolitan Halifax region over the last few decades, she knew it would take nearly an hour to get into town and Patricia McGovern's clinic, located to the north of the grounds of Dalhousie University. While Louie was actually doing the driving, Rinrin got out her Aniki Special laptop and began running through her notes for her various graduate year classes. Fortunately for her, today was a day she only had one class with a following seminar -- Artificial Cognation 447 -- at Dalhousie, so she could relax herself and take time to work on some of her pending research essays and seminar presentations.