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	Greg was in a rush as he finished all his work and prepared to leave his office. He was usually in a rush to leave his office every day, but today was different. It was the twins 18th birthday.		Greg was in a rush as he finished all his work and prepared to leave his office. He was usually in a rush to leave his office every day, but today was different. It was the twins 18th birthday.

	In the past 13 years since the artificial human project was formally announced, just over 30% of the world population had converted, or died and been reborn as HRMS. So far, everything was going just as John had projected, with the elderly population slowly dying out from either old age or complications due to radiation sickness.		In the past 13 years since the artificial human project was formally announced, just over 30% of the world population had converted, or died and been reborn as HRMS. So far, everything was going just as John had projected, with the elderly population slowly dying out from either old age, or complications due to radiation sickness. The younger population was slowly converting after they came of age and got jobs, and the ones who had converted in the first year were already having, or had already given birth to artificial human children. Another thing that had happened in the last 13 years was Greg and Sabrina had two more children, a boy and a girl, and both artificial. As things stood, James was their only organic child, though they didn’t treat him any differently, nor did he treat any of his siblings differently.

	The younger population was slowly converting after they came of age and got jobs, and the ones who had converted in the first year were already having, or had already given birth to artificial human children.

	Another thing that had happened in the last 13 years was Greg and Sabrina had two more children, a boy and a girl, and both artificial. As things stood, James was their only organic child, though they didn’t treat him any differently, nor did he treat any of his siblings differently.

	Once Greg had all of his pending work either saved or filed, he shut everything down in his office, grabbed his bag and headed out.		Once Greg had all of his pending work either saved or filed, he shut everything down in his office, grabbed his bag and headed out.
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	“Calling it a day sir?” Emily asked from her desk.		“Calling it a day sir?” Emily asked from her desk.

	“Yes Emily, I’ve got to hurry home for the twin’s birthday,” Greg smiled to her.		“Yes Emily, I’ve got to hurry home for the twin’s birthday,” Greg smiled to her. He initially found it odd that Ipek and Emily never aged over the years. But, as time passed, he eventually found it comforting to know that at least one or two things in his life would always be the same.

	He initially found it odd that Ipek and Emily never aged over the years. But, as time passed, he eventually found it comforting to know that at least one or two things in his life would always be the same.

	“Aww, I haven’t seen them in a while,” Emily said, “How are they doing?”		“Aww, I haven’t seen them in a while,” Emily said, “How are they doing?”

	“They’re doing fine,” Greg said, “It’s their 18th birthday, and that’s a big deal for anyone,”		“They’re doing fine,” Greg said, “It’s their 18th birthday, and that’s a big deal for anyone."

	“I see” Emily smiled, “Before you go, several of the agents here pooled their money and got them gifts,” she said, pulling a pair of wrapped presents from behind the desk.		“I see” Emily smiled, “Before you go, several of the agents here pooled their money and got them gifts,” she said, pulling a pair of wrapped presents from behind the desk.

	“Oh, that’s nice,” Greg said, taking them from her and putting them in his bag, “Try not to work too hard after I leave~~,” he smiled~~.		“Oh, that’s nice,” Greg said, taking them from her and putting them in his bag, “Try not to work too hard after I leave."

	“Don’t worry sir, I plan on powering down in less than an hour,” she smiled, getting back to work.		“Don’t worry sir, I plan on powering down in less than an hour,” she smiled, getting back to work.

	Greg liked how casually she referred to her functions. Ipek acted almost the same way, though she acted more like a family member than as a personal secretary~~. She~~ even had her own bedroom and salary.		Greg liked how casually she referred to her functions. Ipek acted almost the same way, though she acted more like a family member than as a personal secretary; she even had her own bedroom and salary. Greg slowly left the office, dodging past the numerous agents that wanted to alert him to something. He referred them to his second in command and finally managed to escape the building to his car to make the short trip home. When he finally arrived home, the party had just begun, with all of James and Julie’s friends, as well as family members all over to welcome them to adulthood.

	Greg slowly left the office, dodging past the numerous agents that wanted to alert him to something. He referred them to his second in command and finally managed to escape the building to his car to make the short trip home.

	When he finally arrived home, the party had just begun, with all of James and Julie’s friends, as well as family members all over to welcome them to adulthood.

	~~“Ah, I see you finally escaped,” Sabrina said, welcoming him into their house with a loving embrace~~.

	Time had treated her well, especially since ~~artificial humans~~ could control the way she aged. She still looked as beautiful as the day he met her, though her face looked wiser in a way only he could tell.		“Ah, I see you finally escaped,” Sabrina said, welcoming him into their house with a loving embrace. Time had treated her well, especially since she could control the way she aged. She still looked as beautiful as the day he met her, though her face looked wiser in a way only he could tell.

	“Yeah, we finally caught that body borrower and figured out how did it,” Greg said, putting his bag done and placing the gifts on the table with the rest of them.		“Yeah, we finally caught that body borrower and figured out how did it,” Greg said, putting his bag done and placing the gifts on the table with the rest of them.

	“Good,” Sabrina said, “That guy was totally creepy,”		“Good,” Sabrina said, “That guy was totally creepy."

	“I take it everyone’s here?” ~~Greg asked.~~		“I take it everyone’s here?”

	“Yes, and the twins are waiting for you in the yard~~,” Sabrina reported~~.		“Yes, and the twins are waiting for you in the yard."

	“Well, let’s not keep them waiting any longer,” Greg smiled, and the two of them slowly made their way to the backyard where everyone was having a good time.		“Well, let’s not keep them waiting any longer,” Greg smiled, and the two of them slowly made their way to the backyard where everyone was having a good time.
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	“Dad’s home!” Greg heard, and then all four of his kids suddenly charged him.		“Dad’s home!” Greg heard, and then all four of his kids suddenly charged him.

	James had managed to look a great deal like Greg, though he had many of Sabrina’s nicer attributes. Julie, on the other hand, looked almost exactly like Sabrina except she had more of Greg’s intelligent gaze in her eyes, and she had a more athletic build.		James had managed to look a great deal like Greg, though he had many of Sabrina’s nicer attributes. Julie, on the other hand, looked almost exactly like Sabrina except she had more of Greg’s intelligent gaze in her eyes, and she had a more athletic build. His other two children, Kyle who was 15, and Lana who was 13, were also slowly growing up, but did not come as close in resemblance to their parents.

	~~His other two children, Kyle who was 15, and Lana who was 13, were also slowly growing up, but did not come as close in resemblance to their parents.~~		Once his kids broke apart, John suddenly approached. “Hey Greg, I heard you caught that body borrower."

	Once his kids broke apart, John suddenly approached.

	“Hey Greg, I heard you caught that body borrower~~,” John said~~.

	“Yeah, thanks to all the help you provided with that equipment I ordered,” Greg smiled, giving John a hug.		“Yeah, thanks to all the help you provided with that equipment I ordered,” Greg smiled, giving John a hug.

	John had become pretty famous following the world wide announcement 13 years ago, but he still worked out of the same office as before.		John had become pretty famous following the world wide announcement 13 years ago, but he still worked out of the same office as before. “Yeah, it’s very interesting how the guy was doing it and not getting caught,” John continued, “Attaching the brains to a sandbox machine to fool them into thinking they were going about their day normally. Very impressive."

	~~“Yeah, it’s very interesting how the guy~~ was ~~doing it and not getting caught~~,” ~~John continued~~, ~~“Attaching the brains~~ to ~~a sandbox machine to fool them into thinking they were going about their day normally~~. ~~Very impressive,”~~		“It was,” Greg said, “Fortunately that latest update you released allowed my equipment to track his A.I. identification code."

	~~“It was~~,” ~~Greg~~ said, ~~“Fortunately that latest update you released allowed my equipment to track his A.~~I. ~~identification code,”~~		“Well, I for one am glad that that guy is off the streets,” John said, “Though I do hope you’ll let us offer him a job once you’re done prosecuting him."

	~~“Well, I for one am glad that that guy is off the streets,~~” ~~John said~~, ~~“Though I do hope you’ll let us offer him~~ a ~~job once you’re done prosecuting him,”~~		“Really? Are you sure?” Greg asked, “He was nothing more than a creep that violated people’s bodies for his own pleasure."

	~~“Really? Are you sure?” Greg asked, “He was nothing more than a creep that violated people’s bodies for his own pleasure,”~~		“Yeah, but he also managed to exploit all of the security we’ve painstakingly put in place, and with proper work, we might be able to use his genius to further fortify that security."

	“Yeah, but he also managed to exploit all of the security we’ve painstakingly put in place, and with proper work, we might be able to use his genius to further fortify that security~~,” John explained~~.

	“Well, I’ll have to discuss that with the deputy director and the Attorney General,” Greg said, and before either of them could say anything more, Sabrina announced loudly that the time for presents had come.		“Well, I’ll have to discuss that with the deputy director and the Attorney General,” Greg said, and before either of them could say anything more, Sabrina announced loudly that the time for presents had come.

	Everyone gathered around the table that had all the presents piled up on it. The largest present by far, which was from John, was a very large box. Julie was very excited as she approached, because she and many of the other people knew what was inside; her 18 year old body, fresh from John’s lab.		Everyone gathered around the table that had all the presents piled up on it. The largest present by far, which was from John, was a very large box. Julie was very excited as she approached, because she and many of the other people knew what was inside; her 18 year old body, fresh from John’s lab. Greg had been pretty strict with her genetic algorithm, giving certain feminine attributes a more modest size, instead of the larger size she should have developed. He promised her she would be more well-endowed as soon as she turned 18. The second she opened the box and showed everyone what her older body looked like, he both smiled and groaned as he imagined all of the boys who would be fawning over her in college; several of them were already fawning over it now. It didn’t help that it was dressed in a very flattering dress.

	Greg had been pretty strict with her genetic algorithm, giving certain feminine attributes a more modest size, instead of the larger size she should have developed. He promised her she would be more well-endowed as soon as she turned 18. The second she opened the box and showed everyone what her older body looked like, he both smiled and groaned as he imagined all of the boys who would be fawning over her in college; several of them were already fawning over it now. It didn’t help that it was dressed in a very flattering dress.

	“Looks like you’re going to have some trouble,” John smiled, sensing exactly what Greg was thinking.		“Looks like you’re going to have some trouble,” John smiled, sensing exactly what Greg was thinking.

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Part 8.3: The End & The Beginning

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Spaz: /* Part 8.2: Next phase */

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Spaz: /* Part 8.1: Final upgrade */

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Spaz at 04:43, 28 October 2014

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	“Okay,” She said, and after taking another look at their previous bodies, they closed up the alcoves and headed back out.		“Okay,” She said, and after taking another look at their previous bodies, they closed up the alcoves and headed back out.

	==Part 8.2: Next phase=		==Part 8.2: Next phase==

	==Part 8.3: The End & The Beginning==		==Part 8.3: The End & The Beginning==

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	==Part 8.1: Final ~~Upgrade~~==		==Part 8.1: Final upgrade==
	True to John’s word, Greg and Sabrina were called in several weeks later to receive their final body upgrades. While everyone else from the group was to be called in later that day, and over the rest of the week, Greg, Sabrina, and Julie were considered VIPs and had the first available slot.		True to John’s word, Greg and Sabrina were called in several weeks later to receive their final body upgrades. While everyone else from the group was to be called in later that day, and over the rest of the week, Greg, Sabrina, and Julie were considered VIPs and had the first available slot.

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	“Okay,” She said, and after taking another look at their previous bodies, they closed up the alcoves and headed back out.		“Okay,” She said, and after taking another look at their previous bodies, they closed up the alcoves and headed back out.

	==Part 8.2: Next ~~Phase~~=		==Part 8.2: Next phase=

	==Part 8.3: The End & The Beginning==		==Part 8.3: The End & The Beginning==