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	....but I digress. It's been a wild, weird and wonderful ride so far, and I have no intention of slowing down when 2014 starts----Vicki would probably hate me for it if I did....and if she actually existed. And I could end this by going into a spiel about how she does exist in our hearts and minds...but instead, I'll say this: You ain't seen nothin' yet, and what you will see in 2014 is going to be....fantastic.		....but I digress. It's been a wild, weird and wonderful ride so far, and I have no intention of slowing down when 2014 starts----Vicki would probably hate me for it if I did....and if she actually existed. And I could end this by going into a spiel about how she does exist in our hearts and minds...but instead, I'll say this: You ain't seen nothin' yet, and what you will see in 2014 is going to be....fantastic.
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	For a brief instant, he smiled, believing he'd finally taken down the stupid Lawson girl....		For a brief instant, he smiled, believing he'd finally taken down the stupid Lawson girl....

	...only to stare, dumbstruck and frightened beyond all rational thought, as the lights came up to reveal her standing three inches away from him, smiling serenely. "First of all,", she politely informed him, "you shouldn't point a gun at someone unless you're willing to kill them. Secondly....."		...only to stare, dumbstruck and frightened beyond all rational thought, as the lights came up to reveal her standing three inches away from him, smiling serenely. "First of all," she politely informed him, "you shouldn't point a gun at someone unless you're willing to kill them. Secondly....."

	She grabbed his free hand with her left hand, raised it...and dumped six spent rounds into it.		She grabbed his free hand with her left hand, raised it...and dumped six spent rounds into it.

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	“The only reason I was ever scared of you was because I thought you were more than just some whack job in a mask,” Vicki continued, “but now I see you for what you really are. You're not just faceless...you're hopeless, because you're so far past the point where anyone could've saved you. And the really sad thing is, you were never a decent person to begin with---and I know this because I've read up on you. You're not like Gacy, or Bundy, or Dahmer---hell, you're not even like Myers. You kill because you find it amusing, because you think it's funny when they squirm...” Her eyes narrowed to slits. “....except I'm not squirming now, and I never will again.”		“The only reason I was ever scared of you was because I thought you were more than just some whack job in a mask,” Vicki continued, “but now I see you for what you really are. You're not just faceless...you're hopeless, because you're so far past the point where anyone could've saved you. And the really sad thing is, you were never a decent person to begin with---and I know this because I've read up on you. You're not like Gacy, or Bundy, or Dahmer---hell, you're not even like Myers. You kill because you find it amusing, because you think it's funny when they squirm...” Her eyes narrowed to slits. “....except I'm not squirming now, and I never will again.”

	By this point, the ghostlike image of the Butcher of Lake Gilmour was fading in and out of ~~existance~~. “You can't....beat me.....you never did....”		By this point, the ghostlike image of the Butcher of Lake Gilmour was fading in and out of existence. “You can't....beat me.....you never did....”

	“I don't want to beat you this time,” Vicki replied. “Now...I only want you gone.”		“I don't want to beat you this time,” Vicki replied. “Now...I only want you gone.”
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	“I'm not afraid of him,” she finished, just as the blades were about to pierce her, “and I'm not afraid of you!”		“I'm not afraid of him,” she finished, just as the blades were about to pierce her, “and I'm not afraid of you!”

	In a blinding, roaring instant, Faceless dissolved into blocky bits of pixels and static, which in turn faded away into ~~nonexistance~~. His scream seemed to hang in the air for a moment or two, stuttering like a damaged CD before finally trailing off into something that sounded disturbingly close to a pained moan.		In a blinding, roaring instant, Faceless dissolved into blocky bits of pixels and static, which in turn faded away into nonexistence. His scream seemed to hang in the air for a moment or two, stuttering like a damaged CD before finally trailing off into something that sounded disturbingly close to a pained moan.

	“And that,” the light-girl's voice declared, “is how you do that.” She materialized a few feet away from Vicki a second later, grinning; “Looks like you terminated the last few files he tried to corrupt,” she informed the brunette gynoid. “Just so you know, all the files he messed with were old driver files from your previous hardware configuration---in plain English, from your old body....and that stupid thing someone tried to hook up to his brain has been extracted without incident, so that's not a problem either.”		“And that,” the light-girl's voice declared, “is how you do that.” She materialized a few feet away from Vicki a second later, grinning; “Looks like you terminated the last few files he tried to corrupt,” she informed the brunette gynoid. “Just so you know, all the files he messed with were old driver files from your previous hardware configuration---in plain English, from your old body....and that stupid thing someone tried to hook up to his brain has been extracted without incident, so that's not a problem either.”

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	Damn good thing he doesn't know about this, then...		Damn good thing he doesn't know about this, then...

	The ~~firey~~-haired gynoid couldn't help but wince as the compartment on her right thigh opened, revealing what appeared to be a featureless black slab of plastic no bigger than an average smartphone. Of course, the thing was a smartphone---one that could only be used by a registered operative of the House, no less. As she held the phone to her ear, squares lit up on its formerly blank surface, as if she was dialing a number; technically, she was dialing...just not with her hands. After a nanosecond of waiting, the call connected.		The fiery-haired gynoid couldn't help but wince as the compartment on her right thigh opened, revealing what appeared to be a featureless black slab of plastic no bigger than an average smartphone. Of course, the thing was a smartphone---one that could only be used by a registered operative of the House, no less. As she held the phone to her ear, squares lit up on its formerly blank surface, as if she was dialing a number; technically, she was dialing...just not with her hands. After a nanosecond of waiting, the call connected.

	{You're in position, Celine.} It was a statement, not a question---if she hadn't been, she wouldn't have called.		{You're in position, Celine.} It was a statement, not a question---if she hadn't been, she wouldn't have called.
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	Well, I don't really see a reason not to.... With a sigh, Vicki glanced at the TV in the corner of the room---		Well, I don't really see a reason not to.... With a sigh, Vicki glanced at the TV in the corner of the room---

	---and nearly gasped as a figure seemed to emerge from the screen, aiming its ~~firey~~ broadsword at her---no, past her, directly at the spectre of Faceless in the corner.		---and nearly gasped as a figure seemed to emerge from the screen, aiming its fiery broadsword at her---no, past her, directly at the spectre of Faceless in the corner.

	Needless to say, the Butcher of Lake Gilmour was not happy.		Needless to say, the Butcher of Lake Gilmour was not happy.

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	“Not the way I see it,” Reaver countered. “If they enter through that narrow hall under the fountain---”		“Not the way I see it,” Reaver countered. “If they enter through that narrow hall under the fountain---”

	“If they do,” Oberon interjected, “then they'll have us in a bottleneck---the Agents in front will only be able to move ahead, while those in the back of the group will have to fight. Even against just two, a fight in a narrow hall can easily turn ~~agaisnt~~ us, which is why we won't give them the opportunity. Now, then, unless anyone here has any better suggestions...”		“If they do,” Oberon interjected, “then they'll have us in a bottleneck---the Agents in front will only be able to move ahead, while those in the back of the group will have to fight. Even against just two, a fight in a narrow hall can easily turn against us, which is why we won't give them the opportunity. Now, then, unless anyone here has any better suggestions...”

	None of the Field Agents said a word.		None of the Field Agents said a word.

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Spaz: New page: =Part 1= "STOP IT!” Hannsen's words came out in a shriek---quite different from his earlier, bravado-laced remarks. “You didn’t stop yourself from killing Sharon,” Vicki replied,...

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New page: =Part 1= "STOP IT!” Hannsen's words came out in a shriek---quite different from his earlier, bravado-laced remarks. “You didn’t stop yourself from killing Sharon,” Vicki replied,...

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