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<h3>Greetings to you Bioroids, Originals, Fellows!</h3>
<h3>Greetings to you Bioroids, Originals, Fellows!</h3>
<p style="margin-top: 2ex; text-indent: 3em;">
My name is Irina Volkow and for sure you already have
My name is Irina Volkow and for sure you already have
spotted I am a cybernetically enhanced woman. This is
spotted I am a cybernetically enhanced woman. This is
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insight than him on how it is to become and to be a machine
insight than him on how it is to become and to be a machine
woman. I hope I can give you an impression.
woman. I hope I can give you an impression.
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| 戦闘機械 綾子<br />
| Sentō Kikai Ayako<br />
| Battlemachine Ayako<br />
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| Written by [[User:darkbutflashy|darkbutflashy]]<br />
| Edited by [[User:rdaneel|R.Daneel]]<br />
| Originally released on fembotwiki<br />
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Ayako and I work for Olympus ESWAT. Dark has said to me
Ayako and I work for Olympus ESWAT. Dark has said to me
you may already know Olympus from the famous Manga  
you may already know Olympus from the famous Manga  
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may get the picture even without reading those books.
may get the picture even without reading those books.
Let your fantasy flow.
Let your fantasy flow.
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What Dark has really told me to impress upon you is this
What Dark has really told me to impress upon you is this
isn't a piece of fanfiction for ''Appleseed''. You may
isn't a piece of fanfiction for ''Appleseed''. You may
remember some of the people in the story, well, because those are the guys and
remember some of the people in the story, well, because those are the guys and
gals Ayako and I work with every day. But do not expect this story to circle
gals Ayako and I work with every day. But do not expect this story to circle
around Deunan and Briareos or have their characters developed - or worse,
around Deunan and Briareos or have their characters developed —or worse,
repeated. It has been 20 years since the events of ''Appleseed'' and in the
repeated. It has been 20 years since the events of ''Appleseed'' and in the
meantime, Deunan has followed Lance as ESWAT chief, while Lance had retired
meantime, Deunan has followed Lance as ESWAT chief, while Lance had retired
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cooperation. Briareos has become the old hand of ESWAT for good reasons and is
cooperation. Briareos has become the old hand of ESWAT for good reasons and is
still taking the squad lead most of the time, like he had done before.
still taking the squad lead most of the time, like he had done before.
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A lot of other things happened in the last 20 years. but it is still undecided
A lot of other things happened in the last 20 years. but it is still undecided
whether Olympus is an utopia or dystopia. Maybe that's just how life goes.
whether Olympus is an utopia or dystopia. Maybe that's just how life goes.
Worldwide political instability, social imbalance, and - to spice it up -
Worldwide political instability, social imbalance, and —to spice it up—
plain crime leads to all kinds of violence against the citizens of Olympus.
plain crime leads to all kinds of violence against the citizens of Olympus.
Which is the reason why our ESWAT unit is still needed.
Which is the reason why our ESWAT unit is still needed.
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Ayako and I mainly work as hostage negotiators and —when negotiations fail—
Ayako and I mainly work as hostage negotiators and - when negotiations fail
as hostage rescuers. The latter only since... oh well, I better tell the
- as hostage rescuers. The latter only since... oh well, I better tell the
story Dark has taken down up from the beginning to avoid spoiling the best
story Dark has taken down up from the beginning to avoid spoiling the best
parts.
parts.
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A last note from me, especially on these "best parts": both Ayako and I are
A last note from me, especially on these "best parts": both Ayako and I are
real women with real feelings. Human feelings. We certainly get physical too,
real women with real feelings. Human feelings. We certainly get physical too,
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adorable we are as persons. Plus, I will punish you, and not in the good,
adorable we are as persons. Plus, I will punish you, and not in the good,
sexual way.
sexual way.
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Aww, now I cannot await the moment where I'm up to tell you what happened to
Aww, now I cannot await the moment where I'm up to tell you what happened to
me regarding this: it's so freaking cool to have a body like this. I never
me regarding this: it's so freaking cool to have a body like this. I never
expected the sex...
expected the sex. .&nbsp;.&nbsp;.
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And here's Dark. He's cute, isn't he? I better start with the story right
And here's Dark. He's cute, isn't he? I better start with the story right
now before he punishes *me*. Oh yeah, do me, angry little robot... Hihihihi!
now before he punishes *me*. Oh yeah, do me, angry little robot. .&nbsp;.&nbsp;. Hihihihi!
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;[[戦闘機械 綾子 - Battlemachine Ayako/Interlude|Interlude]]
;[[戦闘機械 綾子 - Battlemachine Ayako/Interlude|Interlude]]
:Gender equality went too far
:Gender equality went too far
;[[戦闘機械 綾子 - Battlemachine Ayako/Rough'n'Ready|Rough'n'Ready]]
:We're fools to be professionals
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Greetings to you Bioroids, Originals, Fellows!

My name is Irina Volkow and for sure you already have spotted I am a cybernetically enhanced woman. This is not my tale, but that of my dear friend, Ayako Ontemba. She's a cyborg woman like me. Dark has written down her story and has asked me to tell it to you as I have more insight than him on how it is to become and to be a machine woman. I hope I can give you an impression.

/-------------->----->
| 戦闘機械 綾子
| Sentō Kikai Ayako
| Battlemachine Ayako
+--------------<-----------<
| Written by darkbutflashy
| Edited by R.Daneel
| Originally released on fembotwiki
\---------------<-----------<-------<------<

Ayako and I work for Olympus ESWAT. Dark has said to me you may already know Olympus from the famous Manga Appleseed from the even more famous artist Masamune Shirow. If you don't, buy a copy of it and read it. It's really great stuff featuring sturdy women and a lot of awesome machines. Just sturdy, awesome machine women are missing there - Shirow created Ghost in the Shell afterwards to fill that gap in his work. However, you may get the picture even without reading those books. Let your fantasy flow.

What Dark has really told me to impress upon you is this isn't a piece of fanfiction for Appleseed. You may remember some of the people in the story, well, because those are the guys and gals Ayako and I work with every day. But do not expect this story to circle around Deunan and Briareos or have their characters developed —or worse, repeated. It has been 20 years since the events of Appleseed and in the meantime, Deunan has followed Lance as ESWAT chief, while Lance had retired and has since been working as a honorary counselor for international police cooperation. Briareos has become the old hand of ESWAT for good reasons and is still taking the squad lead most of the time, like he had done before.

A lot of other things happened in the last 20 years. but it is still undecided whether Olympus is an utopia or dystopia. Maybe that's just how life goes. Worldwide political instability, social imbalance, and —to spice it up— plain crime leads to all kinds of violence against the citizens of Olympus. Which is the reason why our ESWAT unit is still needed.

Ayako and I mainly work as hostage negotiators and —when negotiations fail— as hostage rescuers. The latter only since... oh well, I better tell the story Dark has taken down up from the beginning to avoid spoiling the best parts.

A last note from me, especially on these "best parts": both Ayako and I are real women with real feelings. Human feelings. We certainly get physical too, and I will report it unsparingly, like Dark has written it down. But if you just rush through the remaining story to get to these hot & steamy parts, you are going to miss the whole point of them. Which is feelings and how adorable we are as persons. Plus, I will punish you, and not in the good, sexual way.

Aww, now I cannot await the moment where I'm up to tell you what happened to me regarding this: it's so freaking cool to have a body like this. I never expected the sex. . . .

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And here's Dark. He's cute, isn't he? I better start with the story right now before he punishes *me*. Oh yeah, do me, angry little robot. . . . Hihihihi!

The Story thus far

First Encounter of another Kind
Introduction of characters, SWAT action.
Things to remember
An unexpected visit at Ayako's home
Interlude
Gender equality went too far
Rough'n'Ready
We're fools to be professionals


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