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--All good points. I will look into them. [[User:Korby|Korby]] 11:36, 4 March 2009 (PST) | --All good points. I will look into them. [[User:Korby|Korby]] 11:36, 4 March 2009 (PST) | ||
--As to synthetic personalities, there is a brief mention in the first paragraph of the main section, but you're right--it could probably be elaborated upon. --[[User:Korby|Korby]] 11:44, 4 March 2009 (PST) | |||
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Possible clarifications
- The ASU heading should probably be expanded to Android Servicing Unit, and the abbreviation introduced w/in the paragraph. A link to the separate article, currently titled Android Servicing Unit but intended for any similar devices from any settings, may help.
- The Conversion section should probably have a link to transformation.
- The article doesn't discuss synthetic personalities, as far as I can see.
--All good points. I will look into them. Korby 11:36, 4 March 2009 (PST) --As to synthetic personalities, there is a brief mention in the first paragraph of the main section, but you're right--it could probably be elaborated upon. --Korby 11:44, 4 March 2009 (PST)