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Welcome to the FembotWiki '''story writing workshop'''.  This section will provide help to aspiring authors who want to write stories about fembots.
Welcome to the FembotWiki '''story writing workshop'''.  This section will provide help to aspiring authors who want to write stories about fembots.
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katerina, I am  a robot : i am a machine..  machine, my body is perfect, I  like my circuits
every part of me, i like, including the outside part!, i have  beautiful curves, very shaply hipps, my legs are very well developed, they designed me to please  my user so ..i'm perfect,
i think beautifully, i like to be what i am, , i have what humans call beauty, , i have a beautiful shape and now,  looking at herself in the full leagth mirror , she decided with her  logic unit , moved her arms, touched her waist, yes , i think, i am satisfied with my looks. 
but she thought oh, i am programmed to think So!., So thats why  i am happy with my looks,  do i really think that? one nanosecond passed this idea passed again through her processor, she stopped the logic , and said to herself, I don't want to get court in a Programming loop Error!!! self protect activated! thats good , at least my programmers thought of that!
Self corrected her thoughts again.... and spoke  this time audibly ..
i am functioning  perfecly... i must be  .. not  think so much! .i want to be programmend again but i want to stay me...
i must ask my master when he gets home, i want him to touch me,
look at what i really am, admire me, and help modify my programming,
 
 
i know he loves me, love..  , i will give him all he needs, i wil respond to his wishes
there can be no other unit like me! . no other unit other than me, I satisfy him, i think...I know I  think..I  think..Error  again she thougth to herself, stop  logic!
i need reprogramming, i must be reprogrammed, or  i must be used more so  this kind or random think processes will stop, I don't know if it will stop, it's my programming,  i am satisfied,  i must self program,but i can not. i want to self program, but if i tried it, i would stop working, and i don't want that! if i got stuck, during the programming
i would not be able to think , only process the imput command.
i might malfunction, I don't want to Risc it, i might damage myself,  then i would stop working, I must continue to function, it is my core programming, i must obey it
not only that, I love doing what my programming says, i receive satisfaction when i obey
my program.
 
type 02 was a very beautiful woman robot, her designation was symplified for her user
in actual fact her real Unit Number is stamped on her Back Pannel,
out of view, she can not read it herself, because she is programmed not to see it,
not possible for her to read any information about it, even if she found
her product activation keys,  to try to look inside even through a mirror, oltho, she could reveres any text her eyes would see, translate into text, and understand it, but her  Computer programming would see It, the self protect would activate, this  is programmed to Delet any visual display numbers and letters  from her Memory Files
that begin with the Letters Unit K _____ therefore she alone cannot register
the required Product key to permit voice activated Input Programming,
this is required Information when Reprogramming and would normaly be made, by the user,
in fact, she would be in a state motor circuits deactivated, body partly  imobalized,
only her balance Controle would work, but her arms would remain Fixed, motionless, she would be unable to move, Her head however still able to move, upper part of her body,
slighlty, and her eyes, vocal circuits would still opperate, But only to issue, System Status Reports. to user, and hear his commands self input impossible.
 
user controle..
it would be necessary to Do as follows, First Press Command Button on Remote Controle
 
User Must Speak commands to type 02 as follows:
Say : unit Kzla42Zero, accept New Input,
whatever new line of programming that would be spoken Would be transfered Into Text
in her Monitor , Build into her Back Beneath her Beautiful external pannel.
If viewed the pannel would Display the text.
the Type 02 would ask ofter 20 second timeout, Please comfirm YES. no
then the Unit could Update her Programming save Instruction to HardDisc
of course we still say Hard Disk, but inside the robot is something more
than the old fashioned Hard Disks Of yesterday, instead the memory
is stored In Nano techology Based Memory Cartriges, which can be replaced Or Wiped
these memory modules Plug into a universal Rotating Karasel, which by selection of each
module (by User ) can be taken out, slotted into an adapter and pluged into a computer
there with help from a user friendly Software program Installed on a usual computer,
any user could look and see what condition the memory modual is in, and at the same time,
Erase memorys that the user did not like, or replace the entire Module.
on the karasel are more than one trype of modul, apart from memory modules
there are Character type, customization modules, and Activity Modules Containing
Programming which Give the Unit, More or less abilities, like walking normaly, to walking with a sexy walk, catwalk, walking fast, or standard Robotic funtions, all stored In separated
Modules, which Connect through the Karasel Mechanism to her Main Computer,
her Brain however Is a Different Organ!, her brain Overlooks and Responds
syncronising all of her Functions, It's more of a Input output Data responce Device.
her thinking Being Independent due to her Parallel Processor, Programmers thought,
that an android robot, should be able to decide actions itself, Utilizing an InBuilt
Internal Menue System, which only Visible through Android Vison*
her eyes would seem to look ahead as if looking at something But her motionless
actions only for a few miliseconds, From outsider looking in. but her Android Vision*
would see her Menue system, where she could sellect actions,
like walk fast, dancing to music, sexMode, sexy movements, ext, all programmed
and accesable through her Own Selective ability, programmers throught this would
make her Slightly Independent, of a user, having to give each and every Instruction to her,
like walk now!, walk sexy, or do this or do that, she can automatically
decide for herself, without user Intervention,
of course, all of this can be cancelled out, if a user, would simply ask  something of her.
but even then the way she could respond, would depend on her own likes
and Upgrades of software Incorperated Into the Different Modules Mounted on
the karasel.
parallel thinking processors, give a choice of actions, and thought
making unit 02 versatile as a companion, which enable her to think about her actions, independently of her programming.
Being a machine is not just a machine, or simply a Robot,  she must obey her programming always. but can think.
She also has the inbuilt natuaral satisfaction, a feeling generated
by her Programming, when she completes a task to the best of her abillity.
 
alto she cannot stop herself from doing whatever her user asked her to do,
she can think about it, separatly and at the same time she can speak to her user
even when Paused, immobilized, unless user said : Stop.
 
The word "user"  is a  like master, but this robot woman, can be programmed
and can think, decide for itself what it likes, so user, would not be an appropriot name.
it most relationships with this kind of robot, most humans now think of it
as a unique partner and fall in love, an unreplaceble love, which can develope
into a unique bond.
 
Wish or desire?  most wants from the human side of the relationship can easyley be
taken care of by some form of simple Programming.
from observation of the robot, the Robot itself would sometimes  look motionless for a second or so wile loading the programming, but each command is given more as a kind of choice in its menue system.
a Robots  Menue, which it self-selects and decides by a self determined will,
within the parameters given within each internal karasel module. what to do, and how to react, say to her, make love, she would do so, deciding herself, go for a walk together
she Decides  on the walk, her likes, and dislikes, on how to proceed
in what manner, from memory files, and the time before, where wants and desires are
completed which in themselves gave pleasure to the unit itself.
a few years passed as she gathered information about the world,
natuarly there are some things that can damage a robot, she has internal
warning signals which in turn activate subprogramming, which help her to avoid
comming into halms way.
 
very quickly she learned  her  own likes and dislikes, untill one day...
the story began.
 
mac got home about 3 in the afternoon, nothing going on at work, he worked in a werehouse stacking shelves 3 shifts , mornings he had to work harder, bosses all around,  or so it seemed, anyway he did'nt have a lot of  money, not from his job.
lucky for him, his mum and dad left him this great big  house, also with  small amout of money, 50.000, credits.
he spent 12000 of it on Katerina, that is type 02, designation  Unit  Kzla42Zero, she was still the best thing he had ever bought, built to be  general use Robot, with additional funtions & programming stored in standard nano*based plugIn modules all enabled so she can perform other tasks.
 
basicaly she was self maintaining, she could change her own natural based fluid, biodigradable milk like substance,
charge herself, so he  did'n run into any problems, with her,  mostly because she had been
completly overhauld before the last owner decided He wanted something differnt, a newer model, MK 8 so, the is what some people did, the upgraded there android robot untill they got what they  wanted, then decided they needed a newer model, it would of been a desaster for her if she was on the shelf for more than a year, after that, the unit might of been sold for scrap, and mac thought as he saw her, she was beautiful, and in his lifetime, he new, this was exactly what he needed, also he knew, woman, that is Human woman, could be unpridictable, and might just use him, to end up with the house, or at least half of the value of it, should things not work out, and living in a world with so many changes on the horizon,  at least he would be sure about one thing, Robots Don't lie, and don't cheat on you!
A-ZAP shop in the main part of the town. they always got hold of all kinds of electronic stuff
including Droids sometimes robots designed as companions
Rich people always had money for the latest thing on the market.
so really this shop was a kind of hand me downs shop, where if you were  lucky
and you went in there on the right day, you might get lucky.
they usually broke the Droids for spares, occasionally they could sell them on.
there value decreased like a new car!
no matter what you had done to her, the buit year, was the book price.
as he came in the door, she was still sitting on the sofa, strait, poised position, motionless.
he came in and asked, how are you . her eyes opened her eyelidds flattert a few times,
she was looking around the room, her head turned from side to side,
system Engaged now, she began to animate her body, she was slow on startup,
loading her program.
she did not speak, she simply stood, and walked over to mac, stood very close to him,
but did not touch.. mac put his arms around her shapply body, it feelt firm, but soft,
he kissed her, she responded, a few moments, he looked into her eyes, a beautiful dark
cristall blue, looking into her  eyes, looking so perfect,  just motionless,
she awaited his words, he only needed to say, i love you, and she hugged him back
i love you too, he wanted to relax, but also feel her body,  did you require anything Mat?
he answered : only you..
the evening had gotten off to a good start he thought to himself,
this was a robot woman, and she was ready for  any wish he might have,
but mac was still a little bit infatuated with her, and a bit of a romantic at heart.
he wanted to see, how she would respond, each time, in a slightly different way
he was not testing her, but he simply loved to see how amazing she was, able to
decide, how she would be. herself.
not a robot, he thought to himself, this is not just a machine.


==Getting started==
===Choosing a premise===


===Choosing characters===


==Technical aspects==
==Technical aspects==

Revision as of 23:58, 7 October 2012

Welcome to the FembotWiki story writing workshop. This section will provide help to aspiring authors who want to write stories about fembots.

Getting started

Choosing a premise

Choosing characters

Technical aspects

Grammar

Punctuation

Layout and formatting

The Character Triangle method

To quote Grendizer:

I'll begin with a tip of my own. It's called the Character Triangle (well, I call it that). Lejos Egri invented it, and I recommend every writer on this forum read his semminal work, The Art of Dramatic Writing. The central idea here is that at least two of the three dimensions in the character sheet must contain elements in dramatic tension with each other. For instance, a person could have a talent (Physiology) the growth of which is hampered by a poor attitude (Psychology). This creates character depth and allows for a goal for growth and/or change. Without change, your character is dead on the page; something has to give. It doesn't have to be huge. It could be as small as a man getting rid of a phobia, or an android getting an upgrade it asked for that changes everything for its owner, or even some guy losing a limb and dealing with that. Change something -- anything, and use this sheet to figure out how that will influence the character and thereby the story. For example, in my story A New Purpose, one of the characters moves from insecurity to security; how and why he gets there creates the story.
Character Creation Sheet for: [Character Name]


Path of change: [Starts As ==> Ends As]

Physiology

Sex:
Age:
Height and weight:
Color of hair, eyes, skin:
Posture:
Appearance:
Defects:
Heredity:

Sociology

Economic class:
Occupation:
Education:
Home life:
Religion:
Race, nationality:
Place in community:
Political affiliations:
Amusements, hobbies:

Psychology

Sex life, moral standards:
Personal premise, ambitions:
Frustrations, chief disappointments:
Temperament:
Attitude toward life:
Complexes:
Extrovert, Introvert, Ambivert:
Abilities:
Qualities:
I.Q.:
Quirks, Mannerisms: 
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