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New page: ==Possible clarifications== * The '''ASU''' heading should probably be expanded to Android Servicing Unit, and the abbreviation introduced w/in the paragraph. A link to the separate articl...
 
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* The ''Conversion'' section should probably have a link to [[transformation]].
* The ''Conversion'' section should probably have a link to [[transformation]].
* The article doesn't discuss synthetic personalities, as far as I can see.
* The article doesn't discuss synthetic personalities, as far as I can see.
--All good points.  I will look into them.  [[User:Korby|Korby]] 11:36, 4 March 2009 (PST)

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Possible clarifications

  • The ASU heading should probably be expanded to Android Servicing Unit, and the abbreviation introduced w/in the paragraph. A link to the separate article, currently titled Android Servicing Unit but intended for any similar devices from any settings, may help.
  • The Conversion section should probably have a link to transformation.
  • The article doesn't discuss synthetic personalities, as far as I can see.

--All good points. I will look into them. Korby 11:36, 4 March 2009 (PST)